 Midnight Stone 2005-01-18 . chapter 1THat was great! |
 erosgirl 2005-01-07 . chapter 1This is GREAT! I love it, especially the last two lines... It's a great poem. Congrats!! |
 emerelddreams 2005-01-07 . chapter 1well 'I' like it and i'm glad you wrote it. lol. yes, pretty poem. yay! |
 parsnip 2005-01-07 . chapter 1Pretty. And flows very well. I can tell you put some thought into it. Thanks for sharing! |
 Dark-Black-Wolf 2005-01-07 . chapter 1Thats good! I have done a poem before so I know how hard it can be ^^
It must have taken you such a long time but it turned out really well!! |
 Ahyana 2005-01-07 . chapter 1 Spiffy! I like it a lot and I know I sure as heck couldn't anything even somewhat nice.
The only thing I was confused about/disliked was that some stanzas rhymed and others didn't. (Perhaps there was pattern in that I didn't see?)
Anyways, it was really good!. :) |
 Kiaka 2005-01-07 . chapter 1 I like it a lot it's really really good. |