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mythicalprogrammer 2007-12-26 ch 1,	abuseI love your fanfiction. I've read it three times now over the pass few years lol. I wish you would do more RanmaXcrossover match up. Anyway, just wanted to say I had a great time reading it, love it, and thank you.
Asgeras 2007-12-20 ch 19,	abusesniffle, sniffle Great fic. Yeah, it's old fashioned, but I'm a sucker for happy endings (although I'm always happy to see such an ending postponed by endless sequels :P) Not a whole lot to say. I got my main gripe out of the way earlier, and said situation (incomplete sentences) were quite rare. I did, however, have to figure out SOMETHING to gripe about...jeez. Well, thanks for the fic. It was a great little (...fairly large...) read. ^^
Asgeras 2007-12-20 ch 18,	abusesniffle
Asgeras 2007-12-20 ch 17,	abuseAnother fic which I didn't read at first, thanks to formatting. Just like "A New Life", I'm enjoying this fic more than a little. One small thing to note (aka...gripe about :P) is that you tend to, once in a while, have incomplete sentences. Here's an example: ~I should…~ It was Ranma's offer to act as decoy that finally made the, she realized that now. It's just something to be aware of for future fics/chapters. Anyway, thanks for the fic and I look forward to reading the rest.
MoonstoneCabbit 2007-07-01 ch 1,	abuseThis story shows that the ONLY way to make a half-way believable crossover matchup between Ranma and Ryoko work is to murder anyone in the way. Stories like this are why many people hate anything to do with Ranma. I really would like to see a crossover between "Ranma 1/2" and "Tenchi Muyo" that doesn't require making Ranma Tenchi's super-perfect cousin, crossover matchmaking, identity theft, murder and all the other disgusting things Ranma fans do that insult the TM fans and characters. Most of the crossovers I've read of the two were by people who wanted Ranma to be and have everything Tenchi Masaki is and has. When that's done there's rarely any place left in the story for the character actually called Tenchi Masaki. Good fanfiction is written by people who care enough about the stories and characters they use to treat them all fairly. This story doesn't treat Tenchi or Akane fairly at all.
Materia-Blade 2007-05-02 ch 11,	abuseI was going to say that this fic is amazing and I'm loving it but... well you are Thrythlind. So saying that would be saying something along the same lines as "Duh, *." Bows in Awe and inpiration.* Why oh why have I not read the entire list of your fics? Matter of fact, as soon as I finish this I believe that is exactly what I'll do.
Blackdex 2006-11-19 ch 20,	abuseImpressive, if you weren’t already on my favorite authors, this would have put you there. It was a little confusing at parts, and I found the inconsistent formatting very annoying, but the story was well written and very engaging, and that pretty much makes up for any flaws. Ciao
Amenita Virosa 2006-09-25 ch 19,	abusethis is a good story, but for me not a story that i will read over and over. at least for me, there is not the amount of action in it this i like, but its good
Dragon black 2005-11-23 ch 18, anon.	abuse"this suck i give it two dumps down"? Wow. A new low of avredge IQ has been achived, all thanks to this one morron. Mabey we should mail him a trophy.
Dragon black 2005-11-23 ch 20, anon.	abuseYou. Kick. . really, you do. best crosover piaring I'v ever read, OOC is all forgivable, Story is great, And you have a knowledge of Retorical Devices and Mechanics as good as anybody else (read: you can write without sounding like a ) The fact that it has a happy ending for characters that never got one in the Manga is a definet plus. Thank you for your efort, keep up the good work!
anonim1979 2005-09-21 ch 1,	abuseSequel is here http://addventure.bast-enterprises.de/107185.html
Night Hunter MGS 2005-08-15 ch 5,	abuseOne of my favorites, this is an excellent "what if" fic.
Rubel 2005-04-14 ch 20,	abuseNeat. A little depressiing that both Akane and Tenchi died like that but a very good story. Not that I'm complaing about the death since it is part of the story.
Ghost 2005-04-04 ch 2,	abuseHeh, cute. ^^ I don’t know if anyone has told you, but Ryoko doesn’t have a tail. It seems to be a part of her outfit. (From what I can tell. I’m definitly no expert on Tenchi Muyo.) Also, I suppose she COULD be argued to be a kind of martial artist, since at least swordfighting is technically a form a martial arts. Ranma seems to take the whole “living with a non-human girl while talking to her rabbit”-thing a bit too well. I’m not saying he’s not used to weirdness, but he could at least try to figure out what the heck is going on.
Ghost 2005-04-04 ch 1,	abuseWell, that was pretty awesome, all things considered. You still rely a bit too much on dialogue and it’s still tricky to follow at some places, but nowhere near Amazon and Moneylender. Other then that, there’s just a few small things that need to be corrected. (You used “then” twice in the same sentence once, and other stuff like that.) Ranma acts a bit OOC, but with Akane dead, that’s bound to happen. Oh, and just for the record: I do NOT like Shampoo/Mousse pairings. groan

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