Nicely done. Too bad ff dot net messed up your formatting. Looking forward to your sequels once you get them posted.

Thanks for sharing.

cool this is really interesting i cant wait to see what happens next please continue!

Your formatting is horrible. an instant put-off from wanting to read this.

Really really WAFF character. IMO it's the best of the chapters so far, but it could be the romance fanboy in me talking.

Reading onward.

My mistake, so this is not a Tenchi Muyo/Universe fusion, it's a Tenchi Universe fic

I have no complain about the scenario and plot then :D

A bit weird that the avatar of God can die, or may be this is a strange fusion of Tenchi Universe and Tenchi Muyo. But I guess it's the only plausible way for a Ryoko-Ranma pairing, consider how she has been watching Tenchi since he was a kid, thus having Ranma just waltz in and capture her heart like some fic out there would be stupid.

Hey great story, always loved the Ranma Ryoko pairing. So not enough of them out there. You did a great job of keeping them In character and bringing them together as a couple. The fight scene could have been better and longer with Nagi.

This remains a classic...

Thrythlind,

I enjoyed this. I really did. (_)

Looking into your profile, its good to see you still churning out fanfiction even today. If you get the time (and motivation) please come back to this story and fix the spelling and grammatical errors. They aren't too bad, but are distracting.

The plot/story itself, really made me feel good inside.

Thanks,

chronodekar

Quite good. So this is what its like when you get closure because the fic ends? ;p

as i say, fairly good. You havent given me a new OTP though (well you have, but its RanBiki.

Read anything by OneshotWong? I started reading his stuff way back in 2k or so. yours kinda reminds me of that...

ja ne

Can't believe I didn't have this on my favorites list prior to this. I have a copy of this on my HD from 04, and I just found it again while skimming for something to read.

It's a tight, fun story from the start. Granted there is a good bit of angst thrown in with both of them suffering from thier losses but the humor far out weights that.

This was a delight to read the first time and just as good a read today. Thank you for the pleasure you've given me on both occassions.

If anything is misspelled I ask your forbearance as I've had a few todnight.

Post more with Ryoko Saotome

I read this fic years ago when you first started it, and recently reread it. To this day this is still one of my favorite Ranma/Tench xover fics, and the only one pairing Ranma with Ryoko that's finished and worth reading. Great work and still holds up well for an entertaining read.

I own all the Ranma 1/2 and most of the Tenchi series's. So I feel safe in saying that your stories fit well with the canon outlines, although yours are obviously AU.

I "really" can say that I have been enjoying your "Ryoko Saotome" fanfic, and am definitely going to check out your other posting!

Grin, the thought of Ayeka or Sasami finding Ranma romantically interesting seems worth the giggle. It has already been shown that she and Ryoko have similar tastes in men. Your chapter 19 showed that that Ranma and Ryoko are already have adventures in space (no pun intended, although it there). Ayeka's surprise can be anything from a proposal (hers or Sasami ?call for help if they are being forced into it?), a commission (Captaincy or "Letter of Mark"(means you can fight in the name of the government)), to announcement of her own child.

Again, thank you for a darn good read.

May the MUSES always be with you!

-_

and so after many years i actually finished reading this and i liked it nice ending