Linwe, you are a really, really good writer. I honestly can't wait until your book gets published so I can read it. I am really goingto miss once you go to college, even though you are my stinky sister. I love you and don't ever stop writing!

WOW! this poem left me... breathless and speechless. This is deep and touching and wonderful. I love it.

Angst!
A sad little piece of Drac angst. T.T
Nice job!

Yey! Loved it! Loved it! And loved it! You should write more poetry I think, you seem very talented! :-) I'd definitely welcome more!

::shudders:: You are very, very, very ,very, very good at writing poetry. With actual rhymes. O.o Once again, the rhyming is unique and splendid, you are truly magnifiscent with this. Hey, you know, I write my best stuff in Math.^^ My favourite part was this: "Only as a leech who gorges when blood spills, Only as a hole without a soul or heart to fill" because it was so wretched...only a true damned soul can feel that. I mean, you used the word 'gorges', and it was so disgusting, it reminded me of the seven deadly sins, like that sort of horror and blasphemy, which was delightful because of the real emotion it stirred, and also because of how wonderuflly you balance it with "So I just wither in loneliness" which is a very haunting thing, and the line is like a pebble dropped inside my chest as though that were hollow and I heard the echoes as it hit the bottom after awhile, it took a bit to sink in. You are a very powerful poet, Linwe. One day you'll publish a book under this pen name, a book of poetry. It will sell out and they'll have to reprint!