OMG!!
Naruto's dead :( He died peacefully, though. I thought it was so sad the way he kind of thought... "Perhaps it wouldn't be so sad to die." Maybe he would have rethought that had Sasuke loved him at that time. AW :(

I cried so much (:
Really touching.
Sequel maybe??

Wow, what a tearjerker! My eyes would probably be swollen tomorrow. Haha... anyway, it was quite an angsty fic (something I had been looking for recently).

The grammar and choice of words were great. The characters weren't too OOC, except maybe for Naruto. I couldn't believe how weak he was to have succumbed so easily and desperately to Itachi. Nevertheless, I understand that his character's "weakness" was necessary for your plot.

Thanks for sharing this! It was a good piece of work. ^_^ More power!

cute! sad but cute.

God damn it, I cried! T__T It was very touching, please continue to write!!

That was a good story. Sad, but good. It made me sad. I do wish they would have had a happy ending.

TT-TT I haven't cried this much in so long...I love this story, it's really good :)

OMG...so sad...T.T

omg! it's sad. but beautifully written. it waz soo sad that naruto died. i guess, as i was reading it, i had been hoping that jiraiya would have gotten kyuubi anyways, and saved him. or perhaps, just in the nick of time, they found some sort of solution, to save him... anyways, love it!

Do you know how hard I am crying right now? I am sobbing my eyes out right now. Thank you so much for writing this story. ;'|
~Yuki~

nice i like it

what is it with you and death fics? why? why? why? why!? *wails* gr i'll kill that itachi bastard!! let me at'im gr
wonderful story, i feel like killing you though :)

this was a beautiful story
i was so sad when naruto died
bad, bad itachi!
but, nevertheless, a beautiful story

nice and sad...

definetlya dark and sad fic. great writing style though. you did a good job setting the mood and keeping the flow of the story at a suitable pace for the actions that happened.

thanks for the story

and good luck on future works.