Ooh~, I loved it! Very detailed and pretty and hinting. ^3^ I love the little thing at the end, too...

Beautiful, absolutely beautiful

love. pretty sophisticated.

but with the child still in the ridiculous author's notes. =D made me grin evilly...i mean, happily.

excellent.

Very cute :)

This was great. I liked it.

^.^ Nice!

Spamming you yet again for the lovely fic~
/glomps you and runs

i almost cried! beautifully written! oh my god!! oh my god!

Cute little fic. That's the way the game should be played.

Definitely enjoyable. Thanks.

Beautiful! I love the angle you took with Iruka's identity being interspersed with the whole of the village Genin. I enjoyed the ending too, very, very artistically done, everything left up to the imagination!

I really liked this, and I'm glad that it turned out so long! It makes it that much better. I liked how Kakashi played a 'watching' game with everyone, and how Iruka fooled him. And about Iruka's 'inner people' being everyone of the village...it made a lot of sense, and I liked it. I also liked how Sasuke talked to his plants when he thought no one was watching. You did a good job on giving us an introspection of everyone's inner-workings.

This was very pretty. Soft, and with a quiet sort of tone that remained hushed throughout the story. Really, really well done. :)

I run an archive--Hidden Village (URL is on my page) and was wondering if I might be able to archive this?

JB

I liked it very much. Nice job!