well i think that you are right. its a bit over done, but it is funny and it serves its purpus. you shouldnt be flamed. you are right in that daine has no faults, and she needs some. i think that the whole kill numaier thing was a good touch...

Lady Arianna

*sighs* You can only call her insane so many times.

What happened to the Stormwing kid?

She should be committed to an Insane Assylum.

She is stark raving mad. Get a straight jacket. We're gonna need it.

She's mad. Stark raving mad.

Ok, I'd like to inform everyone that since the previous Tortall's Twin story, I am very prone to sudden blank outs. I'll just sit and stare at the screen. *blanks out*

25 min. later

Told ya so.

Poor Daine *pats Daine on head* Don't worry! I'll save you! *dashes off, only to run into something* Huh? *muttering curses in K'miri* Oh lookie! A sign! A Notice from Fan Fiction. Net: Stories cannot be changed by other authors, anonymous peeps who review, and especially CRAZY TAMORA PIERCE FANS! Thank you PS- you can't go through our special barrier, so there!

Dangit. Sorry Daine.

Holy crapy you've gone mad! You psyco child! Haha! The bad side of Daine...hmm.. That was good 'cept it went pretty fast

This was REALLY different...and I feel so bad for Daine's kids! Hope there's something in the next story with her children...Good read though :)

i wod just like 2 say i think u r right.daine is way 2 perfect and its lame how people tink JOREN can b nice he sucks!

ew! a stag baby that is gross!excellant story tho!

daine is so bad!well you made her bad, im not a big d/n fan so i think this is awesome

u rr sooooooooooooooo evil!original but so evil luv it!write on,write on!

Lol. That was funny! But some of these other reviews, some people just take things a LITTLE too seriously. It's just a fanfic...

How come I have never read this before, lol. I am a major D/N shipper but who the hell cares in fanfic. The stag bit was a little OT, but hey its your fic. *Chuckles naughtly*

Radar

I loved it! This is the best fic I have ever read! You used great descriptions and used some very original ideas! This is 100 times better than Part 1 of Tortall's Twin! I don't care if everybody else flamed you. I laughed my ass off!

Great.