im not very good at grammer but just to let ya know you spelled speck wrong its really supposed to be sreak but it was a good short story.GoOd ByE. o_o

Very good, I like the idea of Mace's spirt still being around and at least talking. It was good, take some extra english classes or something if you want to improve you english writing..

-Saboteur

The author had a great concept...but the story needed more detail, EIG.:more adjectives; more conversation between Yoda & Mace. The author admitted to bad grammer & spelling, but needs to work on it anyway. All in all very good for what seems to be a first time piece. I give it 3 out of 5 lightsabers.

Oh, I see. Mace was dead, and talked to Yoda. Hmm. Interesting ... how old was Luke when this exchange took place?

I think you need to rewrite Yoda's lines - they don't sound like he does, they're too jumbled. Interesting idea though!

An interesting conversation. Perhaps you should continue this story, by having Yoda and Windu continue to talk of Luke's training, etc. Keep it up!

I really like this. It shows that Yoda had some doubts about Luke, since Anakin (Vader) is his father. It is a great piece!

You are right; you do have a problem with grammar and comma use and such things. I recommend that you read allot until it all sits in your spine. I like the idea, though, a nice concept :)

I've read over 55 books that fill in the blanks in the star wars universe. I always crave anything that adds to that story. Good job, and thanks for not adding any gay love scenes! I hate that $hit!

Well this is nice,I pardon her spelling.I have hundreds o typos with webtv.You know this may be a good thing with accuarcy.It has all the things accept for what a real SW movie might have.Aeccpt 4 war.

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GOOD. I like the idea and how you handled it. But the grammar mistakes are really didtracting and detrimental to me, the reader. Keep writing. BTW, I'd be happy to beta read for you.

was pretty good. you could have made it longer and it still would have been good.

Good job, Julia! Interesting conversation. I would never have thought about it. ;-) Let's see . . . I know you said at the top of the story that you weren't good at grammar or spelling, but you really should work on it if you'd like to be a writer. I didn't catch many spelling errors, but you're going to have to work on your punctuation. For example, you put: "But this boy is our only hope for any peace." Mace said, "So Master Yoda will you train Anakin's son?" It would have made more sense like this: "But this boy is our only hope for any peace," Mace said. "So Master Yoda, will you train Anakin's son?" See?-notice the comma usage. Don't stick a period between "peace" and "Mace." Always use a comma, unless the entire sentence is finished (or if it's a question mark or exclamation mark). That's one of the most recurring mistakes that you make, and you really should try to work on it. If you don't understand what I'm trying to say, go study other peoples' work, and their comma usage. Well, I hope I've been of some help. ;-)

OK, I read your comment on "To Have and to Have Not," and I'm flattered! I'd love to e-mail you, but I'm not allowed to. You may have any and all of my stories at your site as long as you keep my pen name with them. I won't mind at all. I was hoping that you could put them up by downloading them, or copying them. That is the only way. You won't get an e-mail from me because of family rules. Let me know if this is okay, OK? )