OMIGOSH! :o I loved the last paragraph. (The narrative one) But it had such a sad ending. :{

aww...that was sweet. anyway, i recommend this one: it's atem/oc, i think you'll like it.

I loved it. all of your storys are soo good!

*sniff sniff* WAH! NO! THEY DIED! T_T wa! ...

okay, im better now.

GREAT STORY! ^^ im so sad, though... sad ending... as you can tell... im really crying! ^^ lol. tootles! ^^

NOO! ATEM WAS MEAN! NO! lol. good chapter! ^^

Ah... So romantic... Such a great story-What?! The end already?!

Great chapter! That was suspenseful! ^_^

Good chapter! That was romantic! Better get busy and read some more!

Yo! I'm BACK! Sorry for the silence, but I had wanted to make a big sacrifice for Lent, so I gave up the net. I have a lot of catching up to do on all the updations I've missed. Better get started! I've been craving the net through all of Lent!

cool prequel! a bit sad.

Interesting story, even though it was a little AU. Apparently, though, you've got some issues with the English language. It's deserve, not deverse. And by the way, there weren't any books in Ancient Egypt, they used scrolls.

Wonderful story! But kinda sad ending, but still a great story!

the story was really good the only problem was that i did not get to read chapter 15 and the last chapter 17 why did this happen? o_O

Wow i loved sunras past preqeul it was so sad at the end and you did a wonderful jog as the narrative at the end wow is all i could say i mean you had me in tears!

Ah so that's how it happened! What a great and sad story! Ah well at least we know what happens next! Let's just hope the current adventure I'm reading dosen't end in heartbreak like this one!