Awww, this was very good. I loved it! Himiko's emotions, were very good expressed. Maybe the end was a little too abrupt, but it was a really nice One-shot!

Congrats!

interesting one shot D i wish you'll continue it more xD anyways good luckies with your future stories!

WOW!That was Himiko's emotions and your style's it up.

*sniff...sniff* how sad... well, nice fic! though it doesn't state the ban have feelings for himiko this fic is GREAT! Love it! please continue this stury! *begs*

Sigh. There are so many unopened doors people walk by... it makes me want to cry and sigh... sigh and cry... _ you're probably thinking 'wtf?'... ah. I just had to write that this little one-shot brought a smile to my face. Not that you care. _;;

AaWw! that was so so so sweet!

i swear i stiffled a sob right here...“Why did you become a man too soon?”

especially on this part...

“I’ll bake you a cake too, Ban. If you will only ask. I’ll wait for that…no matter how long it takes.”

i have butterflies inside my stomach right now...

Absolutely adored you fic!

this is going to my favorites...

a bit abrupt towards the end...

cute story... really good written!

Aw! Dat is so darn cute! You so have to write more like this! I love this pairing, it's one of my favourites

Nice. I like your writing style, and I like Ginji's note ( ).

aw...!

well, isn't that sweet? :) though i'm not much of a himiko/ban fanatic i'd say this is really one of the best, short but romantic! ehe...hope there'd be some sequel to this,, :) ja!

uhm..could you make another natsumi/ginji fic? (i'm a really big fan of the pairing) pretty please... :3

Make it longer, darn it! It's short yet feels complete... Like, Ban was just pretending he was asleep... Anything? Please? I have no dignity so... *kneels begging*... *gets kicked*

aaww... its like... uh... too short? and...

bitin!

but its quite cool and cute!

very nice... any chance of a ban pov sequel? nyahahaha... sorry... it's just so cute...)