Intense. I love it.

Wow, dark but cool.

Very...um...frightening and extremely dark, but something about it juct clicks. I could see Naraku doing this if he felt particularly obsessed. Also, the Frankenstein speech really elaborates the fic.

That was so cool... I really, really liked it... I like your writing style. Love is so much cooler when it's out of ordinary. Don't thank me for reading, 'twas a priviledge!

I know I keep popping up everywhere, and it must be annoying, but let me say I adored this SO MUCH. Especially the last sentance. Once again, your vocabulary is amazing, and you vague details are to die for. I love you Nar/Kag's; because of you, I might start writing some of my own. ^__^

Wow . . . that was really well written.

This is really col, i just had some trouble with understanding some aspects though .at first i tought you were talking about inuyasha not naraku .i like the pairing too.