Short but impressing
Made me pause for a moment.

D: I hate it when Tuxie dies (unless he's written as evil, etc)!

-hugs Serena-

Cheers,
~Hazel*

hm...s-k-i-l-l-e-d spells what you are..."undulating," now that's a good word...props for absolute hopelessness/despair...realistic-ish too...decent length, great conclusion...bravo

This story is (VERY) good as it is. You've succeded in putting so much in so few words...
I woldn't mind to read a sequel, though...
just to see him coming back to her, again, somehow...

this is cool

Again, oh wow. This story really gave me gosebumps. I honestly think it's fine as a one-shot, and I'm not sure if I'd like to read any additional chapters - not because it's good, but because it's so good. I mean it'd be nice to see what goes on afterwards, but this chapter alone is so touching. This is the kind of writing I've tried to do in my stories. and the whole time I was reading this, I had this slow, instrumental version of Galaxia's theme stuck in my head, and it's really sad...ah well, continue it if you so fancy, but please just write more in general :)

Aww that's even sadder then the other two... You need to write something happy and bouncy next to weight the ballance but yet again you prooved you're a good writer

hey not bad , hope u update the next chapter soon okbye

whoa...that was sad. I'm on the verge of crying! If u do decide to continue, please please please please bring darien back!