This is a very interesting idea, that 668 may have been created, destroyed, and then replaced for reasons unknown. Interesting, because, you know the red, black, and white apocalyptic crap? Well, it's missing one other. The red horse carries war, the black horse carries famine, the white horse carries death, and...the green horse carries pestalence. So who is this stuck-up, orange-haired broad? What happened to the green horse? ...Yeah, that's right...

So so so so good. It's unusual to find fanfic that can carry itself solely on the power of good writing, but yours does. I think the URTV scene is my favorite so far. I really hope you continue doing these!

Dude you never sent me this! This is a GaignunxJin isnt it? Well whatever...

Gorgeous. Absolutely gorgeous writing. Splendid.

And let's see here...The pairing...Um...I have two guesses: either chaos X Gaignun or Gaignun X Jin. Or...pherhaps Gaignun X Ziggy? O.O BAD THOUGHTS BAD!

Anyways, keep it up.

Beautiful.

There are no other words for your writing. It's simply beautiful.

I must admit that I was confused until I read your note at the bottom. After that I thought it was awesome! The pronouns do make it a little hard to read, but they make sense if you think about it. They give readers the impression of the thoughts running through their heads. Good!

An interesting little story. This is a perplexing issue to present, and using Nigredo to do it is a good choice. Great work!

Awesome! Please update soon