Well I didn't expect the pairing, but I like the fic. Nice job on it. _

PS: It has much true too...

awww sweet :) last 2 lines my fav!

Grammer Natzi moment:

"She didn't know if Harry had already [SEEN] Severus"

"Harry repeated this with three other doors until he saw someone [IN THE] room."

Oh my. *clapping* Well done Severus. Well done indeed. Harry need that and so did you. Need to learn to show emotion once Voldymort is gone.

This was nice. I can't much more on that since this is a chapter of sadness. Missing a loved one.

But if you do write another chapter to this I will most defiantly read it. Because I want to and that i like a lot of the stories you've written.

Aw! That's sad. :( And it's spelled apparate. I think. Hmm...

Aw. This was really good

Very good story! But the whole Sirius/Snape thing seems a bit awkward...Nevertheless, you captured Snape's attitude well. Try and continue!

great story. well... it's surprisingto say theleast. Keep up the brilliantwork!

;-)

see ya' soon.

Very interesting story. Not how I would have done a story like this, but still pretty good. By the way, you put "...was too weak to apparatus..." in your story and asked for accurate spelling. Just to let you know, it's "Apparate." Don't forget the capital "A" because that's how it's spelt in the books. Nice job!

great writing. good dialog. hm. what else? oh yeah. I hope you werent insuniating taht snape was banging sirius before he was lost in the veil? Snape had too much hate for the man to do that. at least in my opinion, unless maybe you think it was teh opposite attracts thing again.

other than that the writing is very good. not choppy, it flows, grammar is good.

Good chapter. I like stories in which Sev./Harry become friends and stories where Snape become Harry's guardian. Slashes though, are gross IMO (in my opinion) so please don't go that way with this one. The fact that you kinda did with Black/Snape is a bit gross... but it is your story.

Apparate Disapparate

write more of this story plesae!