Please update soon!

I can't wait till you update. I was really looking forward to more chapters.

All is forgivin. Just as long as u actually continue at some point or other.

see ya!

FC

plz update soon!

I was wondering when you're going to update?

I was wondering when you're going to update?

Why must good stories be ruined by gay pairings. It isn't natural! Guy on guy is just wrong.

Your grammar, spelling, and use of punctuation... sucks **. I'm really sorry dude, but your English really stinks. There's no denying it. There are lots of instances where you use the wrong words, which cause much face-faulting done on the audience's part.

But you know that already, isn't that right?

However, in any case, I realize that you also have a vast imagination at the same time, and that has made your story so damn alluring so far. You might want to be careful, though. Too much imagination and no logic (with too little pattern for the reader to follow) can lead to overbearingly haphazard and out of character consequences, and people tend to get disinterested when that happens. Just a warning! Plot ahead of time! Doing so prevents writer's block, too!

It'd be a damn shame for this not to get the fame it potentially deserves. Keep in mind that I would not have read this far if I hated your story!

Try not to take this review too seriously. I'm just some jackass with the right of freedom of speech, alright? Alright. I'm off to read more. Salut. Bye.

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I'll see if i can help with that writer's block of yours. how about getting the wizarding world involved again and have everyone come looking for him, only to find our favourite Uchiha. depending on what you want, it could be manipulative or just a worried Dumbles. with what they do for Haku, how about Sasuke say stuff about how he once was as Harry before hand. obviously Naruto and the others will be confused as hell later on, but then it could have Naruto finding out his true past and leading up to the wizards again, ne? Oh, I think you should have Haku live, but if thats inevitable he dies then thats fine. by the way, good job so far and I look forward to seeing how things go with this.

Sa, ja ne!

Interesting story. I'd say have it beta'd, because to put it rather bluntly, your grammar is not so great. But the idea is interesting, so I'd love to read more. Good job with it :)

Love it, keep going.

I like it

Good chapter!

PLS have Haku live, he can be a big bro to both Sasuke and Naruto! Sasuke needs a big 'brother' who's not insane! Naruto needs more family...As for snake pervert and the wizards, when/if they show up, they're in for a nasty surprise! SInce there's NO way Sasuke will let anyone harm Naruto! If they tries, well Sasuke wont take this lying down! And why did you make Kakashi Snape jr? There's NO similies! Snape's not a pervert! Kakashi's a better teacher than Snape! Kakashi is hardly the type who will take his anger/grudges out on Sasuke and Naruto...At least he explains his lessions to Sakura, Sasuke and Naruto clearly, so they can understand! And Sasuke and Naruto mentioned that Kakashi were their tutor for 6 yrs, and they are good ninjas meaning Kakashi did his job right! AND Kakashi is LOYAL to Konoha, meaning he'll NEVER join the enemy of his free will! And last I heard, ninjas doesn't go around killing young children...PLS have Tonks, Remus, Luna and Neville brought in this! I feel they would be more loyal to Harry than Ron and Hermione! The same goes for Gred and Forge! Harry helped them when he gave them the galleons! If Sirius is alive, I WANT to see him brought in this! Since I would love to see someone take Itachi to TASK for the murder of the Uchiha clan! Harry/Sasuke didn't need to lose any more family! What do you mean, Sasuke is the magician prankster? Is there anything you failed to mention? I think the twins, Remus and Sirius would love Naruto, since he pulls pranks...I cannot see the Rookie 9, team Gai and Sand trio liking or approving of Snape's behaviour, much less Dumbledore's manipulations. Trying to utrn a young child into a tool is NOT right! Since Harry never asked for this! And I stongly doubt his parents would approve! I'm sure James and Lily wanted better for Harry, they would want their child to be happy! And I'm sure they left a will with a LIST of people to take Harry in! They knew thiey were in a war, and something might happen to them and possibly to their friends, and I DOUBT they wanted Harry to go to the Dursleys! SO WHY weren't their wishes followed?! WHY didn't they cast a spell that would PREVENT Harry from going to the Dursleys?! They should have sent Harry to Sirius, and bonded them, or send Harry to another dimesion!