 handymanshipper 12/16/11 . chapter 7 Pickachu is a he and Ash had to prove himself to pickachu afore he would even battle for him and wouldn't once obeyed Ash battle against Misty |
 The Flying Lion 11/23/11 . chapter 8OMG I love this. It's nice reading older fics that have more story to tell. This was really awesome |
 turle 11/18/11 . chapter 8Good story. |
 turle 11/18/11 . chapter 7Yeah, Ash is going to the finals! |
 turle 11/18/11 . chapter 6I wonder what their secrets are? |
 turle 11/18/11 . chapter 5I can't believe Brock and Tracey are date peepers. |
 turle 11/18/11 . chapter 4I'm with Brock and Pikachu; those idiots so many chances yet none were taken. |
 turle 11/18/11 . chapter 3Okay they're mean to Tracey saying he's a girl. |
 turle 11/18/11 . chapter 2Uh, uh, uh Ash what would your mother say for slapping a girl? or even thinking about it? Misty letting someone boss her around? what is going on? |
 turle 11/18/11 . chapter 1I wonder why Ash doesn't like Misty's cousin? |
 Anthony1l 8/22/11 . chapter 8This story is hilarious, interesting, original, touching, and unique. |
 AshandMistyLove 3/2/11 . chapter 8I know what the French meant!
did it mean, Together forever no matter how long, now and till the end of time, we'll be together, and you can be sure, that forever and a day, that is how long we'll stay, together and forever more!
AAML:) |
 Daughter Of Poseiden 1/23/11 . chapter 7What are you talking about this chp was amazing! |
 alizabeth 12/30/10 . chapter 8 great story but your ages are screwed up when ash is 14 misty is 15 brock around 26 tracey about 21 admited brock and tracey are educated esitimites only guarntee is by time ash is 14 they our adults who strangley enjoy hanging around youngsters i know why brock dose thats explainable idk about tracey though. and 1 more note i wouldnt trust ash to cook his mother got mr mime cause she almost burnt house down cooking and misty has said before she cant cook if brock wasmt there to cook for them they wouldve ate somewhere else |
 bloop 9/19/10 . chapter 8 Ensemble pour toujours, n'importe comment longtemps dès maintenant jusqu' à la fin du temps nous serons ensemble, et vous pouvez être sûr que pour toujours et un jour qui est combien de temps nous resterons ensemble et pour toujours plus"
i'm french actually it's
ensemble pour toujours, Peut importe combien de temps, des maintenant jusqu'a la fin nous serons ensemble et tu peut etre sur que nous resterons ensemble aujourd'hui et pour toujours. |