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Mooney/Remus
2009-10-22 . chapter 29
Hey..that is not fair Remus is not dead right..?
I do not believe it It is sad
But This is a really nice story
I love this story and ur 2 previous ones of Harry's 3rd and 4rt years in the midnight series
You are a great writer
Try considering ur future career in the field of writing though it is not my place to say this as we do not know each other
though it is rude on my part to say this I will say this too I will read all ur books or stories in the future
Keep up the good work
Am gonna read the next one in the series
U have a unique way of writing
WOw U r amazing..I admire ur imagination and writing style
Keep up the good work
writer1066
2009-10-09 . chapter 29
I was crying in the last few chapters.
a deposite on a rental property might cost about £500, I personally would have taken more out. I love the hotel at the end though:)
story2tell
2009-10-08 . chapter 29
YOU KILLED MOONY! I WILL HUNT YOU DOWN! I WILL HUNT YOU DOWN AND MAKE YOU REGRET YOUR LIFE!! YOU KILLED HIM! NO!

Okay...okay...i'm sorry for that...*sobs uncontrollably* Great story. Hated the fact Moony died.
afraidofreality
2009-10-03 . chapter 29
So who is the voice in harry's head? I thought it was hogwarts speaking to him, who posessed him, is remus really dead? Why is fawkes helping him? Is voldemort pretending to be harry's dad? Did fawkes end the connection? What's going on?
Hocapontas
2009-09-29 . chapter 29
I CAN'T BELIEVE YOU KILLED REMUS! If I knew how I would be flaming you right now! I hope your planning on somehow bringing him back! And why can James talk to Harry? I don't understand that. I assume that Fawkes will be the only one capable of finding Harry. I'm hoping that he will stay with Harry but I know that is highly unlikely. Well I'm off to the next story!
Hocapontas
2009-09-28 . chapter 22
I hope your planning on telling who controlled Harry in upcoming chapters. I want to know who that was and How he and Firenze knew each other.
Hocapontas
2009-09-28 . chapter 16
I really hope this isn't leading up to Sirius dieing. :(
noreenklose
2009-09-20 . chapter 29
I really liked this story, and I can't wait to read the next one. I must admit, I'm taking Lupin's death badly. I had been hoping that this time, the fight at the Ministry would reverse, and Sirius would somehow kill Bellatrix (fitting, no?)

Thank you for writing, and PLEASE continue doing so.

KUTGW,

Noreen
volleyballgirl12
2009-09-10 . chapter 14
I love this chapter! At the end when he was thinking about what Umbridge said and he was thinking if he deserved it when me almost cry! I love it!
Wolfric
2009-09-07 . chapter 29
Great story. It held my attention throughout. Thanks for writing. W.
Hotgirlow
2009-08-12 . chapter 29
update soon
CrazymangoeswithHPGW
2009-06-30 . chapter 29
It Is so sad that Remus died so early :(:(:(:(! What will Harry do now that he's in the muggle world? Will Fawkes stay with him the whole time?
RevengeoftheForsaken
2009-06-03 . chapter 29
This had me crying. Amazing fic, mate. 8'D
ArwenGranger
2009-05-31 . chapter 29
Oh! Another great sequel! Is Remus really dead? I hope not. Can't believe Harry's left, I hope he will be reunited with everyone in the next one. Can't wait to go and read it.
hedwigs-biggest-fan
2009-05-19 . chapter 28
That was a brilliant fight sequence - really well written.

I wonder if there is some truth in what Voldemort says about Dumbledore fearing Harry...or at least his growing powers anyway.
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