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| Oceanee 2008-04-28 ch 18,  | abuseLOL! Bon alors premièrement, j'adore cette fic. J'attendais le dernier chapitre pour laisser une review, mais là, je peux pas m'en empêcher. Que de souvenirs, la canicule, Jacques Chirac (le pauvre, ça fait pas si longtemps que ça qu'il est parti de l'Elysée, et le voilà déjà relégué au rang de souvenir... lol) La conduite des parisiens, tout ça, authentique!^^ Enfin voilà, tout ça pour dire que j'aime beaucoup l'histoire, le développement de la relation Sydney/Irina... j'étais plutôt sceptique quant aux AU dans Alias, je me demandais ce que ça donnait, et là je suis agréablement surprise, l'histoire est vraiment bien! Bon, le pauvre Jack, il en a pris plein la figure, mais ça se comprend... ça fait bizarre d'écrire une review en français sur ce site... je crois que c'est ma première fois...;) |
| Gabiroba 2006-12-18 ch 21, | abuseThe story was good but the ending left a lot to be desired. The change in Kack and Irina's relationship happened too quickly. Though expect that might have been due to you being tired of writing this story or not knowing how to end it. Jack became too accepting, too fast. The rest was really good. |
| Valoriahn 2006-03-28 ch 21, anon. | abuseHey, :) this was a GREAT fic. :D I really enjoyed reading it! Way to go! :D |
| Valoriahn 2005-07-11 ch 21, anon. | abuseWOW! That was awesome!! :D Yours' is only the second story that I have finished! I normally can't stick with 'em for that long but yours' was/is GREAT! No, I don't want it to be over yet, but... oh well! This was so great, I really loved the way you portayed all the characters, very beleivable!! I love Irina so I'm glad you made her a 'good guy'. Way to go! I hope to hear more from you soon! ~Val |
| irionelissa 2005-07-10 ch 21, | abuseI loved the story. This is something i wish i didn't have to say, but it need s to be said. The ending sucked. I mean, it's like saying that Prince Charming found Cenderelle. The End. There needs to be more. Is Jack goning to leave her? Why didm't the CIA do anything? Will Jack stay with themd? What will the CIA do if they find out that Jack found Irina? This questions need to be answered. |
| Staraice 2005-07-08 ch 21, anon. | abuseOH, that was just brilliant. Brilliant. I did like the ending. |
| derevkobristow-spawn 2005-07-05 ch 21, | abuseWAH! *hyperventilates* WHy did you end there? It was soo... hanging *rubs face uncontrollbly* Well, at least it ended happily... :D Good job (yes, I'm calm now Ü) |
| Danielle87 2005-07-05 ch 21, | abusei loved this story it was really great. my only complaint is that you left us kind of hanging. sydney is staying with her mother right? i am pretty sure of that but what about Jack what did he do? did he just go back home or what. well i still really enjoyed it. keep writing you are really good at it. |
| derevkobristow-spawn 2005-07-03 ch 20, | abuseOohh... Go, Syd. Go! Be your parents' matchmaker! |
| grouchy 2005-06-13 ch 19, anon. | abusehope you post the next chapter soon! |
| derevkobristow-spawn 2005-06-12 ch 19, | abuseYes! Yes! They are going to meet! Update soon Ü |
| Valoriahn 2005-06-07 ch 18, anon. | abuseHey! That was AWESOME!! :D Thank you for that nice long chapter, and it was cool learning more about France. :) I love long chapters by the way :) Please update soon! I can't wait to see what happens next! :D Thanks! ~Val |
| derevkobristow-spawn 2005-06-03 ch 18, | abuseWow. Good chapter. And Jack knowing about Irina. *evil laugh* this is going to be good Ü Hmm... French drivers are horrible drivers? Come and visit the Philippines, you'll see that most drivers here don't follow the rules of the road (because everyone is the king of the road Ü) Update soon. This is getting very interesting Ü |
| Danielle87 2005-05-22 ch 17, | abuseGreat chapter! I love this story. can't wait for the next one. i am so happy you made sydney go with her moom. keep it up. :) |
| Valoriahn 2005-05-13 ch 17, anon. | abuseWow, This is REALLY good! I really enjoy your writing style, and I love this story, Irena is one of my favorite charicters and I love reading fics where she is not as bad as she was made out to be. :D Keep up the great work!! Please update SOON! :D ~Val |