That was definitely one of the more interesting stories I've ever read. I've never seen one written in this style before, and while unusual, it was quite good.

Aww... that's so sad!
But great story!

Hee, I love this story!
(Yeah, I read the chapters before this too, but I didn't review. Sorry!)

Wow...all I can say is just..wow. I've admired your writing loads, as I always come back to reread "Raspberry Heaven" every so often, but this just surpassed all expectations. The narrative of this story is what did it; you connected us with the characters, allowing us to completely understand everything that went through their hearts and minds. My only minor complaint is that I felt they achieved their goals too quickly. We never even found out what Namine needed, or Leon. But other than that, this has to be one of the greatest things I've ever read. Great job, hope you come back and write more incredible fics. I'll certainly be waiting.

wow. theres no describing this story. its too great to put into words. awesome work i believe.

The weird part is, I think a lot like Yuffie.
It makes little sense yet, but I'm pretty sure you're doing that on purpose and I wanna read more but I'm sleepy. Grah.

This ended up not at all how I thought it would. It turned into something I wasn't at all expecting. It made me feel things that were slightly unsettling, but comforting in their own way.
When I first clicked on this fic I thought I was going to get a story about breaking free and expanding your horizons and what not. I though I was going to get some friendship sugary sweet emotional keyed fic. In a way, I suppose that's what I got. But it was so much -more-. This story truly transcended the meaning of "fan fiction". It was truly touching, sad, exhilarating, tangible- but the furthest thing from it at the same time, and lovely.
If I were to try to list all the wonderful parts, I'd be here typing forever. So I'll just say this- I love the philosophy weaved into this fic (unintentional or no). I love the little life lessons that were either hinted at, said out and out, or that you had to look for. I love it all.

I can honestly say that this has been one of the most enjoyable fics I've ever had the honor of reading, and definately one of my favorites.
Thank you so much for crafting it and sharing it.

HAH! That was AMAZING! And yes, I was fooled by Yuffie's thoughts. Hehe.

Larxene bought her toothpaste. HAHAHAHAHAHA.

"I hear voices..." Ahaha that made me laugh. Wow. Amazing.

I LOVE how you write! It's entertaining and just wow! It's not the kind of writing I'm used to reading...just has something different in it, ya know? And your writing style definately changed from "Wish I Was Your Lover" (which I just recently read). I wish I could say what it is exactly, but you probably already know xD But AH! Who am I to go blabbing on about your writing? Sorry.

Anyways, the point is that I love your writing. And this fic. Yep!

that was so... i dont know what to say... i cant really describe it... it was so wonderful. i love your writing, it draws me to it... and how the story was made. EXCELLENT. if i had a way with words i could go on for hours about how much i loved this story. but sadly... i dont (and i wouldnt want to wasted your time).

but to make it short and maybe... just maybe show you how good this was to me... i would have to say that this is one of my all time favorite Kingdom Hearts fanfics. and although i have a lot of favorites... this would definately be on the top if i could arrange them in the order that pleases me.

with much appreciation for writing this (or else i would not be able to read it...)

-naomi

I LOVE this. It was written soo beautifully, when Cloud disappeared, I thought I was going to cry. You are AMAZING. That's all there is to it. All of your stories are too GREAT I can't even pick a word to describe them. If you ever decide to write NOVELS or get published or something, you HAVE to advertise that, because I would buy EVERY book you wrote. Alright, I'm rambling.
You Rock!!

This is ineffable. I cried so many times. Thank you.

I read this during class. And I cried so hard. XD *shakes fist* THAT'S FOR MAKING ME CRY DURING CLASS ;O;

'My Oh My' is like a beautiful song. A song that, when you hear years later, brings back that heavy feeling of nostalgia.

Beautiful.
Something about this hit me really deep-down. I don't really know what. I don't think I've ever been this... stumped? Emotionally stimulated? Just generally confused? by a fanfiction (or most books, really) before. And I don't know whether I'm going to cry or not. And I just generally don't really know what to make of this... fanfiction. (It feels like I'm not doing it justice calling it just a 'fanfiction'...) But that's sort of the message, isn't it? We don't have all the answers...

But there's always hope, right?


Or at least that's what I'm getting out of this.

And I'm really just rambling now, but you're an amazing writer. Just thought I'd let you know.

Wow. This story just blew me away, I've never been one for shojou-ai but really, this was...I can't even look at Larxene with disdain anymore. I was a bit put off about Axel/Marluxia(?) (but I'm just a biased AkuRoku fan) and I bawled at the Leon/Cloud...wonderful--thanks for a good read!