I'm blocked and bored!

Thing is, mys sister writes great stories and I seem to have nothing to write about, so reading is just as bad.

I've read your story and haven't really got interested as such. I wish I could, but I can't.

Sorry, I've read better.

It wa very thrilling, suspence and some what strange. Great job on writing it. You've got potential and a good mind for creating stories likle these. I hope you keep your dream and grow up to be writer when you grow up. Again TERRIFIC story. Bye.

This was interestedly written.. confusing and yet it made sense at the same time..if that even makes sense. XD; I wouldn't mind readind another chapter of it, if you write one. (:

"just like the memory of your lovely dead wife, isn't it? a clinging living thing you can't get rid of, that seeps into your pores until you can't take anymore"

It is a smart voice, isn't it?

"(doublecrossing unfaithful **, wasn't she?)"

Amen to that!

This was an amazing chapter. Expecially the end. Powerful stuff.

Ah, it brings me back to thinking about Crime and Punishment...for reasons I can't fathom, since it's not at all the same thing.

But it's very good, and I enjoy being brought back to C and P as often as possible, so thank you.

Aww, poor Mort. Nothing worse than nothing to do and you inner voices against you *sighs*

Good job.

Needs some foreshadowing. Looks nice so far though.