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MORE MORE MORE MORE! ::Baka holds swing flags threatingly:: You may beat me with these things but I will leave bruises so hard you won't sit down. UPDATE ::pauses, embarressed grin:: don't know what got into me there, heh heh, maybe it had something to do with the poorly completed paperwork

hey
good story!! is jinx and raven really sisters or is that something u just made up? i used to watch teen titans but cartoon network put on at a time i cant watch it so i havent seen it in ages!!
its a good story! but i can get a bit confusing at times! other than that!! keep writing more chapters!

~listening to J and M~ who's in love with a statue? anyways good story...my like...i miss band...and band camp...

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I'm too lazy to sign in...lol. Anyways, another great chapter. I really like this story because I feel *there*, you know what I mean? A lot of stories are really good, but the best ones are ones that you really can relate to, and I can definately relate to this one!

Even with the lists, I still have trouble remembering who's who, but I'll pick that up eventually.

Update soon!

(smiles) you've made my day!

i agree with DSL about the charachters, maybe you should include a short charachter summary list type thing as another chapter.

If you need any help, just ask me at school or something, like acctually with Band in class, cause ya know that i have more experiance with htat than you do, but anyways, it's good keep writing

OMG! I'm a bando and I'm jst glad that I don't ahve to go through the whole marching band thing for another two summers, but I think I should stop reading this story just so I'm not dreading it even more (if your in band a nd a freshman you have ot do marching band at my school) But oh well, I'll read it anyway. I love this story too.

Good, and since I was the color gaurd captain, I feel their pain. It gets that hot here, too, and where we had band camp, there was no shade. Even on breaks. D@mn the football fields in southern Indiana...Anyways, I liked it so far, but it is really really hard to follow, due to all the different characters. I know the ones from Harry Potter, Lord of the Rings, X-men, and Teen Titans, but the rest are totally over my head. Perhaps you could slow the story down for a chapter or two and introduce all of the characters better? I had trouble figuring out wether some of them were girls or boys...

Oh, and if you want any details about color gaurd, you can e-mail me. Address is in my profile, is you want. Our gaurd marched with the band, did half-time performances, competitions, and (unfortunatly) band camp with the band, so I can help there, too. BUt it really sounded like you have the whole band camp thing down, so I can only assume that you went through it too?

sweet! write more please?