I know that you've written that you've moved on to writing what you consider less juvenile works, but this story really has tremendous promise. You should consider allowing someone to adopt it so that the fans of the fic will have a chance to see it finished.

Not sure if you even still have this account or what not, but I'm sad you havn't updated or completed your story, and in which case i believe it has something to do with a nasty review that you replied to on the very last chapter you posted up.


Anyways, if you are still writing, your story has been passed around the fan clubs as an excellent story, and has been linked by many websites. So if you are still writing, I am one fan that would love to continue reading!


Best wishes, and lots of love

Koe

I enjoyed reading all eight chapter's please
finnish this fic this is one of my favorite fic's
glad I came across it today.

Two words: PLEASE CONTINUE!

<< too lazy to log in before--I reveiwed as 'Dreanna' to the other chapters. However now I want to put an alert on this story so I signed in :p [Also, I never got up to get that toast, I just continued reading. xDD]

A small note that I forgot to mention earlier; Gabriel and Liam are their first names and as professors they would be referred to by their last names.

At any rate, lovin Draco xD he's so cute when he's jealous. Seamus is awesome too :p gotta love Seamus! The only thing that I have a question about at this point is when Ron was tlking about the prophecy, he mentioned himself and Hermione or something, but it was never said what he was on about. So in later chapters I supose that would be cool to know how they have something to do with the situation. :] Also I don't really like Greg, but that's neither here nor there lol--he's a fine character, and I like him because he's effective and such, but I don't like him on a personal level, because he's so...not 'gay' exactly, but he acts like the stereotype and I suppose I don't appreciate that.

Anyway :] I hope you keep writing this story. I know what it's like to get mean reveiws, but as long as you press through them I think you grow as a writer. <3 peace!

xDD Harry is amazing, he's got so much power!! Draco has more power than him though, right? Or... I don't really see how he could at the moment. Though, on another note, no corrections this time! :p I'm gonna get some toast and move on to the next chapter now.

"were likeemerald ice,", "helpless,shaking", "heardfrom" --all need spaces. "give advise"-- advice.

I lol at the fact that Draco only got exactly three words in. xD that poor guy!! Hopefully he gets at least a full sentence in sometime soon :p

Mostly skimmed this one rather than read it.

"die? studies were inconclusive" --capitalize 'studies'

"attempt tp cross their" -- tp=to, their=there

"person their looking" -- their = they're

"You're are best friend, Moony." --are=our

>> okay, since I can't stand grammatical errors, I have made a note of the ones that stood out to me in this chapter. I'm rather sorry to subject you to this list of them, but nit-picking is something that I have a tendency to do. Therefore, Here's the list of corrections that should be made.

"Gregasked in disbelief" --rather simple, the space between 'Greg' and 'asked' is required.

"as a photo oppurtunity" --speling error on opportunity

Also, as a note, I'd suggest that the letters Harry received would be in itallics or something to set them apart from the rest of the story, after all they're hard to read this way.

In Hermione's letter, it reads: "school. Is everything all right." and she of all people would have correct punctuation, so I suggest putting a question mark in the correct place.

"'Time for you date'" -you = your

"think we've got it done to" -- done = down

"to the reation of the Dursleys" --reation = reaction

"glasses, and your taller than" -- your = you're

"charm at greg and Katherine's" --capitalize Greg

"murmured uncomfotably." -- uncomfotably = uncomfortably

"jealousy is his eyes," -- is = in

"himself, ron, and Hermione" -- again the capitalization of names.

"I need ingrediants," --ingredients spelled wrong

"her eyes, grbbing" -- grbbing = grabbing

"looked at himn" -- himn = him

"could never no more than" -- no = know

At any rate, I loved the chapter...though if there are more mistakes in the next chapters I'm afraid I won't be able to enjoy the story and I'll have to move on. Because I edit so many things it really puts me out of a story when I notice things are not right.
Fanfiction is all about enjoying oneself anyway, so reading on after would defeat the purpose. It's a lovely plotline, though. Very well thought-out and done.

:] another great chapter, though there were a few mistakes.

"'are simply a fact or life.'" [or] should be [of]

"He reached up to touach it and winced," touch is spelled wrong.

There was one more but I cannot remember what it was at the moment. And like the other reveiwer said for this chapter, the "You're definitely a big feline. I was thinking wolf actually" -at first really doesn't make sense, but I do understand what you're saying. They're two seperate thoughts. Still you should clarify that by changing it a bit, or having her say something similar like, "You're definitly a bog feline. I thought you were going to be a wolf, though..." blah blah blah lol

Just a suggestion :]

:] lovin it so far!! Daywalkers--o0o0o0o0o!!

Please continue :)

lol i really enjoyed this chapter and the one before it. sorry if my other review, the one involving the fox and the wolf thing sounded mean, that wasnt my intention.
my only regret is that i cant put this story on alert because you've hinted heavilyish about mpreg. thats one thing i cannot read. hope you have a good time writing the rest.

You're definetly a large feline. I was thinking a wolf actually
That makes absolutly no sense. A wolf is canine. Dun. Thats like saying a fox is feline.

August 2009 Please update this story