DON'T STOP IT THERE!! YOU NEED TO UPDATE RIGHT NOW!! PLEASE!

How I wish I could have read the complete story! But my god, it's beautiful!
Looking at all the other comments, I notice that I'm like 2 years late. WELL...that's..a..my bad.
O_o I wonder why you didn't finish it, seems like Satine89 got to read other parts of it (I would love to read it if you still have it even if it is NC-17...)
I think it would have been funny to see Mandark go to a counselor. Imagine the mind tricks he would play!

wow... i've never seen mandark in such a wonderful point of view...

considering that it's been such a long time since you updated, i hope that you still get to read this review...

i'm still going to wait for an update on this fic... if ever you read this and are ever coming back. :D

i'm guessing either writer's block, or you just completely forgot about the fic...

in any case, i love your fic! :D

:eyes widen: GASP~! UPDATE SOON~!

Wonderful, yet again. Babble problem has been fixed, yay!
TIme travel and Mandark seem to go hand in hand... but you make it fresh and new! Yay!

Cool! ^_^

I like! I like! ^_^

Very cool beginning! Please update? *^_^*

All right. THe chapter was excellent, thanks for taking my advice, however... you'll get kicked off if you post the REAL thing, as they don't allow NC-17 on
One problem is that there seems to be random figures, and babble, at the beginning and end of this chapter. You may want to repost, but it has nothing to do with the content.

Oh... my... God. Amazing. You are, without a doubt, one of the BEST writers ever concieved. I cannot believe how sharp this was. It made me seem like I was there. (You could get this down to a PG-13, I think, though.)
And I'll try to finish chapter three soon... (sweat drops)