And so, we all dance as we weave our dreams, some to the pull of another's strings while some dance for sheer joy. Ryou dances to the pain of his soul. Very well writen.

Well I will REMIND you to actually WRITE in 2nd person. It was very good and sounded so... right in this fic. It was,... how to tell it... magical. I felt as if I was in another realm. A realm in which there are no rules where just magic exists in its full glory and extensity. I cant describe what I felt, its something you cant tell in words, so you dance... o-kay, I think you start to rub on me, but you catch my drift. I liked it alot and if you want to write again somethig like this write it in 2nd person, trust me, it will be the surelative of the superlative of the word "best". Just write moremoremore and continue in your tenshinokokoro(or was it kokoronotenshi *sweatdrops*).

Yours Akino

I loved how you wrote in second person. That has to be the best thing I've read that was written in second person. That's REALLY hard to do, but you pulled it off beautifully, and it shows. I have an obsession with writing about dancing, so this of course drew me in instantly. Please DO write in second person again, because you do it very, VERY well, and that's a refreshing change. _

tell me the person is Seto...Well either I wish it is...yeah...It's so cute! ew...i said cute...but it was!

Um, who was the guy? This is the first fic of yours that I've read, and i need to know. Is it a YuGiOh guy, because if it ain't then I'm not interested.

MUCHO GOOD! I LOVE DANCING!

That was really good.

I enjoyed reading this. It was really good. That sounds so...bland, but I do mean it. I can guess easily who it was, as you said, from your other stories. It was kind of sad in some parts, and creepy, especially with Yami no Bakura's actions, which I think fit him quite a bit. And yet, still, with something like a happy ending. Well done.

You know, it doesn't sound too weird, in second person. You have to get used to it a little in the beginning, but it gives the story a certain atmosphere. ... I wonder what it looks like to see Ryou dance. I think I'll read your other stories to figure out who the other dancer is, though I already have an idea.

On the contrary, Relinquished, you did a wonderful job at Second person narration! This was beautiful... and I do know who the other person is *SMILE*

I'd never written extensively in 1st Person POV before 'WoaF', and now I can't seem to get out of it! help! It's a challenge to write different styles, and you passed with flying colors... and now our Ryou isn't alone. Aww! Kawaii!

MCG

That was really good! I think it was cute too, except the fact the he was alone for most of it.

I really liked it and I think it was so sweet.