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AB
2009-10-14 . chapter 1
Quoi?
Rubiksmycube
2008-04-15 . chapter 1
ooh
mysterious!
BlueAndBooks
2008-04-10 . chapter 1
I completely don't understand the part about Harry's scar, near the end. Other than that, it's a very nice story, with a very nice use of adjectives, and an amazing variety of words.

But the last paragraph really doesn't make sense to me...
Vestal Harlot
2007-02-17 . chapter 1
I really like depressing oneshots for reasons I don't understand. They always make me upset because they're sad and short. *sniffs*, Great one shot, loved it.
HowAreYou
2007-02-04 . chapter 1
Wow. That was such a good story. loved it completely.
KyootNShort
2005-11-06 . chapter 1
Uhmm... I'm confused. I read it 4 times.
blue blazes
2005-10-04 . chapter 1
Very intriguing... one of those snippets that you could build a whole new story off of, if you had the time to put into it. That's probably that most intriguing part about the LV/HG pairing, that they're intellectually matched... I love the stories that build off that. =)
MarbleGlove
2005-07-03 . chapter 1
Oh Wow. I really like this story. It makes me wince with sympathy. Love at first sight, or the discovery of a soul mate is not always a blessing. Sometimes it's just not enough to overcome the barriers made either by others and by ourselves. This story shows a brief glimpse of a road not taken, and it's a heart-wrenching view.
LadyEspelle
2005-06-02 . chapter 1
I like your story. Funny thing though; check out this one: %20Espelle%27s/One%20M\
oment.doc

I hope you have access to that groups. If you don't you should get it ASAP anyway.

Was written by me, so I'm aware that it's not too good, but it's practically the same idea anyway!

By the way; not accusing you or anything, don't want any note and nothing, just thought it was a funny coincidence I you might share that assessment.

And I really do like your story.

Everything good to you,
Lady Espelle
?????
2005-03-25 . chapter 1
nee? ...I don`t get it.
ObsidianEyes
2005-03-02 . chapter 1
Huh?
Amerise Rei
2005-01-18 . chapter 1
I loved it. subtle yet very effective with the silent, mutural communication. I'm glad you are writting again, but I was kind of hoping you would continue writing "Unhealed Wounds" and "Degree". Keep up good work.
A.R.
Clairchen
2005-01-14 . chapter 1
Great you're back! Voldemort being struck by a schoolgirl while facing his archnemesis is a battle is an intriguing picture!
ashley48506
2005-01-12 . chapter 1
what? its done? could you please make a sequel, it would be great or maybe an epiologe. ttyl.
ashley48506

p.s. i forgot to mention that that one chapter seemed to be enough.
Black-Rose23
2005-01-10 . chapter 1
I'm still confused about why they recognize each other. But still a good story.
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