This is my pick for the most romantic story in the American McGee's Alice section. The content is a masterpiece, but the story needs a rewrite to fix some spelling and grammar errors. This has been added to my favorites section. I'm such a sucker for Alice/Cheshire pairings. Well done!

A bit of "alternate universe" here, I noticed. Your Wonderland appears to be real just as it is in my own stories of a modern, American Alice.

Very good indeed! I found I rather enjoy the cheshire/Alice pairing recently, but in all of them the cat became human and I couldn't help but wonder what would happen should he remain a feline... Amazing, but, for one time I don't seem to mind a zoophilia so much. By the way, if it isn't too forward, I could correct a couple of things in the story should you wish. If so, please do e-mail me and I shall send a document with the corrected version so you can re-post it.

Your obediant servant

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-giggles- nice even if it is a bit weird... still i love the pairing defantly going on my fave list.

Satsu

you people realise there are sick people that do this for real.

HEHE!! FURRY LEMONS!

ahahahahahawhaughugh. >_< that's so well written, but so messed up.

I loved it. Though the grammar did put me off a bit, it was still a really good story. I'd be totally pleased if you wrote a second part or something. I'd love to see this comtinued.

it is oddly romantic. i liked it, but the bad grammer was a bit annoying