Great start - wish there was more. Loved seeing Mooner come to the rescue. Thanks for sharing and take care.

I really like your writing, but I am having a real problem reading it without quote marks around people's spoken words. Also, so far everything Ranger says is missing. It's like I got erased or something. Please finish!

What happened? What are all the BR, P and all that? Will you be finishing this story?

Oh darn! Another excellent story unfinished. It's been over five years since the last update so I'm guessing it will never be done. Sure wish it could be though...

Loved Your story so far, but what happens next, I'm dying to know?

Good story. Would like to see where you go with it. Would rather NOT see all the garbage, though. Made it a little difficult to get through. Hope you update soon.

Okay, I like enough to have read through all the weird formatting on this chapter - where's the rest of it? )

Can't wait!

Peanut16

i cant read it

PLEASE CONTINUE IT

ahh... i swear i hate to read cliffhangers... update please...

I love it, PLEASE update it soon, I need to know what else happens!

this is good. update soon.

I'm really enjoying this story, but your chapter 6 appears all messed up. Codes and stuff. You might want to clean it up, reads a bit annoying like this.

That's really enthralling now! I wanna know what happens to Valerie and what that former associate wants from Steph!

And much more I'm curious to know what Ranger and Steph will tell each other in their conversation!

Hope you update soon, 'cause I really like that story and it's much fun reading it!