THAT. WAS. SAD. But really touching and heartfelt. I really loved how this was written and I'm amazed to know English isn't your first language. I loved the comparison between eyes and air where he says, "the most important thing of all is that you can see everything through them." and another that touched me especially was the line where you say "Kenny's prayers become so loud that he's screaming"
That just gave me chills, no joke. Anyways, you've done a really, really, REALLY good job and thank you so much for writing this!

Oh, man, that was really sad. I started crying! Oh, you're so cruel. Even though it was sad, it was also... beautiful, in a way.

OMG this is so sad!

Stan: Oh my God you killed Kyle!!
Kenny: You bastards?

AWw I feel like crying myself. I love Kyle

OBG that was so sad. But good.

this made me cry! :(

beautifully written, though.

That made me cry :( but it was a good story if it can sway my emotions like that. :)
But then again I cry if a step on an ant so...

wow... it's just... wow. I've never had the urge to cry while reading anything but I felt tears in my eyes towards the end. You are an excellent writer. Awesome job.

Before I gush about this story's amazingness, there's one little grammar thing - some of the tense is a little off. But that's understandable, since English isn't your first language...
Anyway. This is incredible! The way you've pieced together the emotions of all four boys is amazing. Kyle's last words and death made me sad, of course, but for some reason the phrase that really hit me was "Kenny's prayers become so loud that he's screaming." I don't know why, but that made me want to cry.
Amazing story... I'm favoriting. :)

That was a very good story that made me tear up a little.

Thanks so much for posting!

-Pom

god damn it!
im crying!

Did you cry when you wrote this?? I started crying...right when Kyle said"I don't hate you" So very sad...

Very, very good story, it made me cry. I love how, even after Cartman cheats him out time and time again, Kyle always thinks there's good in him, and he was right. I would put this story in my favorites, except for one thing: Did you really have to change their ages? This story would work perfectly fine when they're still nine, like in "Kenny Dies". If tat had been the case, I would favorite it.

I got chills at the end. omg ;o;

Kyle... that was so sad I cried... T_T