I agree with the other reviewers that you captured Luce perfectly here - I even started to cry a bit. Great job :)

This is a very sweet sad story.

W...ow! :o I really mean it, Wow. That was so...Nice? ...Sweet? ...Touching? It was so...I can't even find the right word(s) to describe what I felt after reading that.

Hmm...it's a little short...maybe stick it in a collection of Suikoden-themed drabbles?

Otherwise, it was good. Brings me back to when you had to break the news to Luce. I always felt so bad for her.

I hate you.. T_T *cries*