Nice story, but very common beginning. I like how it's going now but I'm going to go all the way through because for once, I found a non-SoujirouXMisao/Koaru so on and so forth.

However, I should probably point out the numerous spelling and grammar mistakes:

I betrayed the Meji?
Meji is Meiji. ('ei' makes that long 'a' sound)

They looked quit strong, they where al armed and they where with five-
They looked 'quite' strong, they 'were' 'all' armed and they 'were' with five-

-just to scare the other of
-just to scare the other 'off'

Do you know why I have al this bandages?
Do you know why I have 'all' 'these' bandages?

My job was to assassin people for them. (noun use)
My job was to 'assassinate' people for them. (verb use)

I won't go any further, since one of us is bound to grow bored (lol I already have). You tend to overuse small words like 'scared' or 'look', why not 'terrified' and 'appear'. Use it has a thesaurus. Trust me, I use it all the time! XD Also, revise your content, if you don't believe it's up for the job still, ask for a second opinion.

Otherwise, great plot so far, I look forward to more.

~Aspendragon

hmm... maybe instead of yellow eyes you could say golden.

Where is this fic in terms of RK? I mean it could be before Kenshin learns of Shishio or after and he is already on his way to Kyoto.

OMG! I LUV THIS STORY!

learn to type in one of yer sentences you put "farter"
Lol overall the story was awsome! till then sayounara

Ohh! i think that is so fluffy! i love this chappy! confusion is always good!

Yay! that is so cool she could run again! i think soujirou is so hot and adorable!

wow shishio was being kind of too dangerous

Wow that was a good chapter. i like your story so far.

Yeah! i know i'm kindof late of reviewing your chapters, but i just found your story.

A little mistakes, but it's a very good chapter. i like it myself

I liked the chapter so i'm reviewing!

OOH! it's very good. i like it. your english is very good.

HAHAHA! got hit in the face by a piece of wood...sad that they have to steal to life though D:

COOL!But...how about the sequel??this is gettin' very long...*fall asleep*SD