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Samairi
2009-11-16 . chapter 1
Sque! Hot chocolate is always the best place to start. :D I loved it. Once again, great job! I'd love to see more of Sasuke and Naruto in these interesting scenarios... ;D
Mrs Hatake Itachi
2009-08-22 . chapter 1
Nice story!
candycloud44
2008-12-01 . chapter 1
:D
that was very nice indeed.
Supreme Dictator of the World
2008-11-28 . chapter 1
aw this is too cute. i love how they both acted like nothing happened. the accidental kiss is one of my favorite cliches and u made it even better for me. :)

ciao
miley1006
2008-04-25 . chapter 1
Aw, so fluffy, I LOVE FLUFFY STUFF! XD
-kyuubi11-
2008-02-01 . chapter 1
hahahhaah LOL
that was soo cute !

such a cute scenario to come up with ^_^
Lady Chou101
2008-01-03 . chapter 1
i love you! your an amzing writer, i just hope u write more SASUnaru soon, i mean i adore ur two fics of them, they are both in character, naruto is slightly ooc, but i adrore him cuz he's so cute, i (painfully) await your next update.
are u even updating this story?
is it complete or what? if so, then mark it as a complete one, anyway, i absolutly adore ur sasunaru fics, and i want more, but i dont think ur alive, or even updating on sasunaru anymore right? right?
*sigh* such talent...
rest in peace my dear author...*prays for you*
-.-"
i really hope ur not really dead, that would be...
awkward?
sad?
humiliating? (on my part)
ugh! i'm rambling, i ALWAYS do that, gosh, i need to break that stupid habbit, *starts singing "i'm breaking the habbit" by linkin park*
tralalalalala...
c ya ^_^
Fields of View
2007-08-08 . chapter 1
aww! love the everyday-life sort of feel! I love the feeling of lay-back and (sort of) peace of the little moments Sasuke and Naruto shared in this shot. It makes me feel so warm and fuzzy on the inside! haha great job!
wind-master-redmoon
2007-07-17 . chapter 1
ohh ths is really goo can't wait for another chapter
Azamiko
2007-04-24 . chapter 1
Awsocute!
red-headed psychopaths wanted
2007-02-13 . chapter 1
aw kawaii!
keep it up! :D
XD
Ms Trick
2006-06-03 . chapter 1
I love your style of writing. It's funny and poetic all at once. That's difficult to pull off. Plus the story itself was to die for. Both Naruto and Sasuke were very in-character. ^^ LOVED THIS! Don't stop writing!
NekoAnime
2006-04-24 . chapter 1
Wow, that was a really well written... one-shot, first chapter of more to come? *looks hopeful* Actually it works well as a one-shot. Poor Naruto, I could just imagine his forlorn expression as his hot cocoa trailed away before his eyes. *snickers* I really liked the way that you decided to end this as well. And with the way you began the story it gave us just enough insight, knowing the Naruto universe, that Sasuke's family was probably dead and the same for Naruto, without actually having to state it. The whole trip outside was endearing and the rough and tumble of waking up was amusing. Great job on this, I hope to see more from you in the future.
anonymous
2006-03-12 . chapter 1
that was so cute! nice job
Chan-Rhea
2005-12-06 . chapter 1
Hey dead last hero!
I really like your one-shots because firstly they keep the reader interested till the end, unlike other people...but yea whtever...its gd...i ahven't found any constructive critism, if tht's wht u want, but i loved this piece...
I'll also leave a review for ur other story - 'Impractical Jokes' - that was cool too!
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