 Samairi 2009-11-16 . chapter 1Sque! Hot chocolate is always the best place to start. :D I loved it. Once again, great job! I'd love to see more of Sasuke and Naruto in these interesting scenarios... ;D |
 Mrs Hatake Itachi 2009-08-22 . chapter 1Nice story! |
 candycloud44 2008-12-01 . chapter 1:D
that was very nice indeed. |
 Supreme Dictator of the World 2008-11-28 . chapter 1aw this is too cute. i love how they both acted like nothing happened. the accidental kiss is one of my favorite cliches and u made it even better for me. :)
ciao |
 miley1006 2008-04-25 . chapter 1Aw, so fluffy, I LOVE FLUFFY STUFF! XD |
 -kyuubi11- 2008-02-01 . chapter 1hahahhaah LOL
that was soo cute !
such a cute scenario to come up with ^_^
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 Lady Chou101 2008-01-03 . chapter 1i love you! your an amzing writer, i just hope u write more SASUnaru soon, i mean i adore ur two fics of them, they are both in character, naruto is slightly ooc, but i adrore him cuz he's so cute, i (painfully) await your next update.
are u even updating this story?
is it complete or what? if so, then mark it as a complete one, anyway, i absolutly adore ur sasunaru fics, and i want more, but i dont think ur alive, or even updating on sasunaru anymore right? right?
*sigh* such talent...
rest in peace my dear author...*prays for you*
-.-"
i really hope ur not really dead, that would be...
awkward?
sad?
humiliating? (on my part)
ugh! i'm rambling, i ALWAYS do that, gosh, i need to break that stupid habbit, *starts singing "i'm breaking the habbit" by linkin park*
tralalalalala...
c ya ^_^ |
 Fields of View 2007-08-08 . chapter 1aww! love the everyday-life sort of feel! I love the feeling of lay-back and (sort of) peace of the little moments Sasuke and Naruto shared in this shot. It makes me feel so warm and fuzzy on the inside! haha great job! |
 wind-master-redmoon 2007-07-17 . chapter 1ohh ths is really goo can't wait for another chapter |
 Azamiko 2007-04-24 . chapter 1Awsocute! |
 red-headed psychopaths wanted 2007-02-13 . chapter 1aw kawaii!
keep it up! :D
XD |
 Ms Trick 2006-06-03 . chapter 1I love your style of writing. It's funny and poetic all at once. That's difficult to pull off. Plus the story itself was to die for. Both Naruto and Sasuke were very in-character. ^^ LOVED THIS! Don't stop writing! |
 NekoAnime 2006-04-24 . chapter 1Wow, that was a really well written... one-shot, first chapter of more to come? *looks hopeful* Actually it works well as a one-shot. Poor Naruto, I could just imagine his forlorn expression as his hot cocoa trailed away before his eyes. *snickers* I really liked the way that you decided to end this as well. And with the way you began the story it gave us just enough insight, knowing the Naruto universe, that Sasuke's family was probably dead and the same for Naruto, without actually having to state it. The whole trip outside was endearing and the rough and tumble of waking up was amusing. Great job on this, I hope to see more from you in the future. |
 anonymous 2006-03-12 . chapter 1 that was so cute! nice job |
 Chan-Rhea 2005-12-06 . chapter 1Hey dead last hero!
I really like your one-shots because firstly they keep the reader interested till the end, unlike other people...but yea whtever...its gd...i ahven't found any constructive critism, if tht's wht u want, but i loved this piece...
I'll also leave a review for ur other story - 'Impractical Jokes' - that was cool too! |