   jjxd 4/8/04 . chapter 1stupid mom,poor shigeru |
| Darks Light 2/21/04 . chapter 1 o thats soo sad! please continue wit this story! |
| Feirdra 8/5/02 . chapter 1 O.O * shudders * Poor Shigeru. Wait… didn’t he leave the rest of his Pokéballs in his room? Oh, wait, no he didn’t. Musta missed that little tidbit… Well… Is there gonna be more? There should be… |
| Silver6 9/15/01 . chapter 1 Neat story. Poor Gary... |
| Banshee 10/4/00 . chapter 1 Good fanfic! It's the first pokémon fic I've actually liked so far...why do pokémon fanfic writers tend to suck, anyway? *Sigh* But yours was great... wll written...good plot line...Good characterization. I like! |
| Whisper2000 9/21/00 . chapter 1 ::Sniff:: Poor Shigeru, he doesn't deserve that! This fic really made me cry, and its really hard to do that. |
| Patented Stormbrat 9/13/00 . chapter 1 O_O Great fic... Is there a sequel?Poor Shigeru...*thwaps his mother* DOn'T DO THAT TO SHIGERU! He's better than you, stupid Shigeru's mother! |
| Kinzoku 9/7/00 . chapter 1 *sniffle* what a sad story... |
| Mewalia 6/24/00 . chapter 1 !
::::sniffles::::: WHAT HAPPPENS TO HIM? ::::chokes Arti::::: I NEED TO KNOW!
Ahem. I really liked it, and I demand a sequel! |
| Amanda 6/4/00 . chapter 1 Oh My!Please write a sequal,I don't care what about,just please write a seqaul to this story!PLEASE!Very well writen!It had me in tears!::crys:: So sad,yes those kind of actions,are being made by mothers in real life too.All the time.But,yet again,this story was great,please write another part! |
| Bluewater Vaporeon 5/17/00 . chapter 1 Aww, poor Gary! An intersting version of his background which helps explain why he's so determined. Hope you'll continue it. |
| Iya 5/11/00 . chapter 1 Oh my gosh, that is the saddest. . . |
| ZRab 5/4/00 . chapter 1 Love it! |
| PKMNFlynn 4/28/00 . chapter 1 Pretty good. I liked it. |
| Charles RocketBoy Reilly 4/28/00 . chapter 1 That was dramatic. It nearly made me cry! U R cool. |
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