aw that was cute! very cute! great job!

That was so good. You are so god! That story made me cry! (I'm such a softy.)Anyway, I really hope you write a second chapter as long as the first. Hope you continue!

AW!THIS WAS JUST 2 CUTE!I LUVED THE END! u should write more inu/kag fluff! it's soo cute! but it also helps tht inu/kag are one of my fav couples.

Its SO romantic I love it So much! I wish you didn't end it there but I guess it would make sense to stop it. Make up anthor story like this one with more Romance between Inu and Kag! My FAV characters! THEY ROCK! Keep on writing! Forever your reviewer!

lol! ha ha ha! snoop dogg! *calms down* good story:)

aww, cute, therz more rite?, tho even if u did stop here it would be okaytoo

I'll admit that this was disconcerting to read after your previous fic, since it is set so much earlier in the timeline, but I think I made it out ok.

There's only three things that could make me feel bad in Inuyasha fandom:

1. When a character I care about dies

2. Post-series fanfiction. Those tickle me so much. Gah. Scary.

3. “Osuwari, osuwari, osuwari, osuwari, osuwari, osuwari, O-SU-WA-RI!” Ouch. I always think, that would really really hurt. Painfulness.

Another incredibly above average fanfic, though honestly not a section of fandom I would read had it not been by you.

Have fun and please do keep writing,

Kalliel

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