Beautifully written,I loved the way it flowed! There's sadness,pain yet has so much love care in it. .

Ahh...so this is anime based (that explains why I was wondering about why it was like this...the manga is different apparently...)

...that's really truthful. and deep. I like your descriptions.

I like.

As a singular paragraph on a character goes, this is pretty cool :o

this is a very nice litto three-paragraph story of emotions, i like how you portray their Shinigami-selves and contrast meroko's with her angel and human qualities. the only thing i dont like is the title, but it's not unbearable, dont fret about it ; overall very good stuff )

Ooh awesome :D I really think you should expand on this!