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OddObsessed
2008-02-10
ch 1,
abuseYay, OddxAelita.
I dunno how come I'd never read this fic before. It's good. I'm adding it to favourites as well as my C2 ^^ Loved it!
-OddObsessed ^_^
Dragon C. Chan
2005-11-10
ch 1,
abuseAw!
Mayday Parker
2005-11-02
ch 1,
abuse*sniff sniff*
Beautiful! I love it! Sad yet sweet. The situation was handled perfectly. Excellent job.
Please promise me you'll do more Odd/Aelita things. Pretty please? You do them so well.

Cookies n' Hugs!
*Mayday*
Purple Lurker
2005-10-10
ch 1,
abuseDude! That rocked! And since I hate one-shots with cliffhanger endings I of course have to command: MAKE IT A TWO-SHOT, YOU! I'm done now. Eh, if you get published for real someday, email me the title.
becky
2005-06-29
ch 1, anon.
abuseit is so good,i think you should carry on with it
ShadowGryphyn
2005-03-15
ch 1,
abuseaweman! what a story!
IllegalDayNightSnappingIgua...
2005-02-03
ch 1,
abuseand i'm not really an odd/aelita supporter. and i liked it. got me all choked up. its just something about it not being able to happen that makes it so amazing. wow i liked it. but i was confused... they were talking about materializing aelita, even though she was in the real world, and that just confuzzled me a bit. well anyways, i liked the story a lot
Ransomed Heart
2005-01-15
ch 1,
abuseWow.

I'm crying, so all I can say is wow.

While I don't technically support the pairing, I am one of the viewers who has caught little hints of it and wondered about Odd's true feelings for Aelita, and this fic captured that very well.

Excellent writing, I am very impressed.

Ransomed Heart
OnexIrkenxSmeet
2005-01-13
ch 1,
abuseYou are an amazing writer.
Curingangelx3
2005-01-13
ch 1,
abuseWOW, this was so well-written! I'm not really a huge fan of this couple, but I could actually feel what was really going on. I hope to read ur future fics! GREAT JOB!

~Curingangelx3
Wind91Rider
2005-01-12
ch 1,
abuseWow, this is powerful! I've never read and Odd/Aelita fic before, but it's alright. You're a great angst writer. I look forward to reading more of your fics!
Flying Star *too busy to si...
2005-01-12
ch 1, anon.
abuseAnd another great songfic! Personally I'm not an Odd/Aelita fan, but this again brough
out such rich emotion as Odd did what he had to do, but still felt crushed by his decision.
Awesome job.! ^_^

PS. Still trying to login in the post that Jeremie oneshot, but still having some problems.
And again, sure you can send me that fic. ^_^
Little Vili
2005-01-12
ch 1,
abuseI loved this story. And I think it was good as is, being a one shot and all. You dont need to go on IMO, I like how it ended, and I think thats all that need to be said.

In a way, this reminds me of me and my ex-girl friend (who I still love with all my heart, and atleast we are still friends). I was kinda sad, infact, very sad. I like when the mood is set in this fasion, I really like those kind of stories (but then again, I like many kinds, but this being CL, it emphasizes that a great deal. And its easier to understand.

I loved your story, and all of your others. I didnt even mind the Odd/Aelita semi-pairing (because it fit). You are very good ay making thses kind of stories, and I hope to see more. Good luck on all of your future titles.

~Vili~
Linii-chan
2005-01-12
ch 1,
abuseWow! That was spectacular! Honestly, it was really, really awesome! You are such an unbelievably talented writer! And Odd/Aelita is one of my favorite pairings, too! As cute as Jeremie/Aelita is... for some reason, I've always loved Odd/Aelita more.

Anyway, as I have said, this was absolutely beautiful and terrific. Please keep writing! As wonderful as your one-shot's are, perhaps you should write a multi-chapter fic? I, for one, would be interested in reading it.

Linii-chan ~*
SamBlob
2005-01-12
ch 1,
abuseWow. That's got to hurt. Pain all around, and Odd's will probably last the longest.

I can imagine it now; Aelita going to Jeremy's room, not finding him there, opening the door to leave and seeing him in the doorway, returning from looking for her after he realized he had no idea where she would have gone.

One nitpick: I'm not sure the word "blonde" has an "e" at the end when it's referring to a boy.

I'm not sure what I can say about this that I haven't said about your other CL fics. The usual superlatives apply, I guess...
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