HA HA...they landed in a M*A*S*H unit!! I guess that is a good of a place to land as any to deal with a gunshot wound! Less likely to ask too many questions. ;)

Yay for our heroes of this story!! This was a cute short story Daynawayna :) Good job! I really enjoyed rereading it again :)

AW...forlorn Phineas! OMG...Victoria DIDN'T...OMG, she DID! :O

Good for Tracy, beating Victoria like that! Very angsty! HA HA...see ya Victoria! :P

Great chapter! :)

YAY for Issac! Sneaky Issac, keeping his old Omni! LOL!

The trip thru this version of the 'Corridor' really must have been dull especially with all the changes in history that are occurring! That Omnitron sure is a great invention, you just had to know that it has the actual history stored somewhere in its data base! They just needed the right key! :)

Poor broken Bogg - crying for his friend! Can't ya just see him all sad and stuff :(

What a coincidence that Jeff would 'fall out' of the Time Corridor into a zone with a fellow Voyager, and one that knows Bogg none the less!

"Sweetie, I keep telling you: Just serve me, follow the rules, and you will be well fed and cared for"...CLASSIC...LOL! Like Bogg would ever serve anyone, or follow the rules...ROFLOL! Not that I would want to be stuck with this sleezy Victoria either!

What a wicked way to cover up a mistake of touching the wrong buttons on the Omnitron! I highly doubt that she is as 'unstoppable' as she thinks she is?!
OMG...WHAT did you do to my poor Jeffy!! He's missing in TIME because of this Victoria chick! GOOD GRIEF!

Great story. I really liked it. Too bad you end it there with a cliffhanger. You should write a sequel. LOL

OMG Mom! That was so cool! A little short for my liking, but still! Now, to quote the show I'm in, "I'm Off to read Crossroads! The Wonderful Crossroads of OZ! lol

okay, scratch that last review! LOL This one's good! Can't wait for the next one!

okay, loved it. But, where's the rest of it! Please, don't leave us hanging!

Great story, very easy to read and follow. I do have a question...how could Issac find Jeff & Tracy to give them an Omni & how could he disappear if he gave them the only working Omni??
Leanne

Great short story, I enjoyed reading it. The action just kept coming. Hooray for Isaac!! I got to really like his character:) You were able to tell an excellent story in just 5 chapters. I forced my hand at this with 'The Seacole Voyage' in One. I could be very wordy at times. haha. I look forward to reading another adventure soon.

Ok, I get it, Victoria rounded up all the voyagers into one Time Zone, brilliant! Tracey sounds like a sweet gal. I was kinda laughing how Bogg kept trying to escape and keeps landing back in the office. I could totally see that happening to him. hahaha. Ok, it's not funny..he's in trouble. However, your writing style is fluid and witty.
You know, My sister and I invented a character that was a study partner and best friend of Bogg, she of course really loved him but he's too busy looking at that blonde. We didn't write any stories for her though. I really do see the parallels you mentioned between our stories. The ideas are similar. Hopefully on my part I can say 'Good minds think alike?' Poor Phineas is crying. I would have loved to see an episode where he really just broke down. He almost did in the Trial one. I'll keep reading:)

Wow, you really get right into the action! I like your words, 'Time Corridor', 'Omnitron', we should all wrack our brains and come up with a Voyagers! Dictionary, lol. At first I was a little confused, wasn't Susan the blonde he admired in Class? But this Victoria character is a real vixen. It's scary how much control the Voyagers in your universe have over our history! I Must keep reading:) What has happened to all the other Voyagers? They must be stuck wherever the omni last took them when she decided to disable them. That's a frightening thought. Poor Jeffrey!

I loved this story..I miss voyagers and jon too..I cant help but wonder how great he could have been..please write more!

Ah, how sweet. Bogg and Tracey, that is just cute.

The thing where the omni corrects history is still bothering me, but I was glued to your story nonetheless.

Oh, in the first chapter where Bogg and Jeff walk into the garden, you used present tense, whereas the rest of the story is past tense.

In all, you've written two stories I enjoyed, so onwards I move to your epic.