That was very sweet. I really liked it.

it was cute and happier then expected

*is tempted to swoon, but refrains, since it would make her look rather silly* Somehow, though I couldn't quite say why, I never doubted that this fic would have a happy ending, in spite of all of Duke's dark thoughts. Perhaps it's just that Honda's easy optimism is catching; I did love the way you wrote him here. Even if I felt that, really, Otogi didn't *deserve* such an easy acceptance. *ponders* Though maybe that's what makes their relationship works; Otogi's need to break free every now and then is balanced out by Honda's ability to let go. Hm. *looks pensive* Anyway, I absolutely loved to read this. ^_^

This just put a smile on my face. I love your characater interaction, great work.

Interesting...Very interesting.

Aw, that was so sweet. I think you stayed in character really well, too. Tristan is kinda...weird. Oddly confidant for a teen, and the sidekick of a sidekick. And Duke is, well, Duke. Excellent work.