 The FanFic Critic 2009-12-20 . chapter 1This was bizarre. Just bizarre. The entire time I was reading it, I was thinking to myself "WTF?!?!?!?!?!?". Very bizarre. That's all I can really say. |
 The FanFic Critic 2009-10-13 . chapter 1 ...wow...I don't know what to say...just wow...VERY interesting, I'll give you that! Poor Mr. Dink... |
 Todd666 2009-04-19 . chapter 1...this is one of the most weirdest fanfics I have ever read. It was very well written but I was confused. Why was Roger wearing a dress?? Anyway, well done. |
 sramsdrow 2009-03-28 . chapter 1Wow...O_O |
 me, art matt 2008-11-14 . chapter 1 more |
 criscodisco 2006-11-06 . chapter 1pretty funny story. i dont think it really fits the characters the way they act on the show, but is definetly creative. The writing was really well done, even though it doesn't really match well with the way doug normally acts. The only thing i might suggest you work on is mr. dink's reaction. His behavior seemed a little suspicious. nice one. |
 romeoharvey 2006-09-29 . chapter 1That was odd... And yet, I throughly enjoyed it. |
 Fat D 2005-07-28 . chapter 1that is crepy I didn't think it would end like that great fic |