 irdohr 2009-06-19 . chapter 3I vote for Gohan/Lime. It's one of my favourite pairings, but there are next to no fics that have it. |
 Alex_whitetigerdaughter 2008-10-21 . chapter 1 C is fine with me |
 sage ninja 2007-07-18 . chapter 3Gohan/ Videl Trunks/ Lime |
 sage ninja 2007-07-18 . chapter 2(a) Capsule corp. field trip |
 sage ninja 2007-07-18 . chapter 1a:Gohan x Videl / Trunks x Lime fic |
 NekoKriszty 2006-08-27 . chapter 6Well, it seames like there was not much romance in this fic... And I don't expect much, too... ;-)
But, hey, update! |
 NekoKriszty 2006-08-27 . chapter 5NOT C!! Anything but C! I think B is the best. ^.^
Still needs punctuation signs. I could hardly figure out Gohan's goodbyes. |
 NekoKriszty 2006-08-27 . chapter 4Well, I thnk it's really stupid from Bulma to show these kids these things if even the government doesn't know about it and stuff... Also, I think it was stupid from her to show Gohan and Trunks in the tank, didn't she think about how embarrassed they would have been if they knew a bunch of girls were looking at their flat chests?
So... Bulma didn a LOT of stuoid things in this chapter. |
 NekoKriszty 2006-08-27 . chapter 3:-( short |
 NekoKriszty 2006-08-27 . chapter 2Well, firt of all I think you should start using the spell-check, and after writing a chapter, reread it. You missed a lot os "s and .s and some sentences were hardly understandable. And it's kinda annoying.
Otherwise, I really like this fic! |
 NekoKriszty 2006-08-27 . chapter 1I like it, but you should watch out for putting question marks at the end of questions, they're missing and its kinda annoying.
Apart from that, the story is good, original (never read Gohan and Videl fighting in class, neither Gohan talking like that of Hercule in front of ppl, neither Gohan making the teacher scream with fear...) so... cool!
Of course it should be Gohan+Videl!! I don't care who Trunks goes with ^.^ |
 anime sci-fi chick book lover 2005-09-02 . chapter 6i think you mean astronomers
not astrologers |
 Avalon86 2005-07-03 . chapter 6It is a really great story. I like it alot. |
 sumnobody 2005-06-25 . chapter 6 please im practily begging u dont make this a gh\vi there r so many of them try lime or an orinal character just not a gh\vi theres still time u can change it. other than that great story |
 Darth Shogun XX 2005-06-06 . chapter 3good story! and thanks |