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irdohr
2009-06-19 . chapter 3
I vote for Gohan/Lime. It's one of my favourite pairings, but there are next to no fics that have it.
Alex_whitetigerdaughter
2008-10-21 . chapter 1
C is fine with me
sage ninja
2007-07-18 . chapter 3
Gohan/ Videl Trunks/ Lime
sage ninja
2007-07-18 . chapter 2
(a) Capsule corp. field trip
sage ninja
2007-07-18 . chapter 1
a:Gohan x Videl / Trunks x Lime fic
NekoKriszty
2006-08-27 . chapter 6
Well, it seames like there was not much romance in this fic... And I don't expect much, too... ;-)
But, hey, update!
NekoKriszty
2006-08-27 . chapter 5
NOT C!! Anything but C! I think B is the best. ^.^
Still needs punctuation signs. I could hardly figure out Gohan's goodbyes.
NekoKriszty
2006-08-27 . chapter 4
Well, I thnk it's really stupid from Bulma to show these kids these things if even the government doesn't know about it and stuff... Also, I think it was stupid from her to show Gohan and Trunks in the tank, didn't she think about how embarrassed they would have been if they knew a bunch of girls were looking at their flat chests?
So... Bulma didn a LOT of stuoid things in this chapter.
NekoKriszty
2006-08-27 . chapter 3
:-( short
NekoKriszty
2006-08-27 . chapter 2
Well, firt of all I think you should start using the spell-check, and after writing a chapter, reread it. You missed a lot os "s and .s and some sentences were hardly understandable. And it's kinda annoying.
Otherwise, I really like this fic!
NekoKriszty
2006-08-27 . chapter 1
I like it, but you should watch out for putting question marks at the end of questions, they're missing and its kinda annoying.
Apart from that, the story is good, original (never read Gohan and Videl fighting in class, neither Gohan talking like that of Hercule in front of ppl, neither Gohan making the teacher scream with fear...) so... cool!
Of course it should be Gohan+Videl!! I don't care who Trunks goes with ^.^
anime sci-fi chick book lover
2005-09-02 . chapter 6
i think you mean astronomers
not astrologers
Avalon86
2005-07-03 . chapter 6
It is a really great story. I like it alot.
sumnobody
2005-06-25 . chapter 6
please im practily begging u dont make this a gh\vi there r so many of them try lime or an orinal character just not a gh\vi theres still time u can change it. other than that great story
Darth Shogun XX
2005-06-06 . chapter 3
good story! and thanks
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