Reviews for After Thirty Years

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Paper Bullet 2008-04-16 ch 1,	abuseAhaha xD This was hilarious! I knew it was Hiei immediately after the short remark but I didn't know it was Keiko 'till the end. Great job! Now go do a BotanxHiei one please. It'd be real spiffy :D Ami
Nanille 2006-11-04 ch 1, anon.	abuseI LOVED THIS FIC! I must say that this is very clever...most people don't bring up the fact that demons and humans age differentally...but u did!! ^_^ It's also really hard to find good fanfics that involve one of the main character couples with someone else but I throughly enjoyed this one!! Great Job!
Meiza 2006-03-12 ch 1,	abuseI generally don't like stories that pair Keiko with anyone else, but I loved the format of this story. And the humor too.
lin 2006-02-26 ch 1, anon.	abuseit was good until i found out who the wife was. keiko, i belive, is not a good fit for this story. not because of yusuke, but because she's too nice to be with hiei. i thought the wife was shizuru, and i belive that is who the wife should have been. otherwise,good.
Killer_of_Humans 2005-07-23 ch 1, anon.	abuseDIE! HOW DARE YOU PUT KEIKO W/ HIEI! YOU WILL DIE FOR YOUR DEFILEMENT OF HIEI!
Jay 2005-06-14 ch 1, anon.	abuseThis was nice. And I liked the slight ambiguity, I thought it was Yuusuke married to Keiko right up until the end. I did wonder when you mentioned the spiky hair, but Yuusuke could have changed his hair style.
d 2005-06-04 ch 1, anon.	abuseweird
yuki kawaii 2005-05-19 ch 1,	abuseahihi.. that was absolutely w0rth the read.. yey.. fisrt 0f all, great j0b.. ü i've already guessed that it was hiei, but i really had a hard time guessing wh0 the girl was.. ahihi.. and really, i wasn't able t0 guess right.. i was actually wishing that it w0uld be b0tan (yeah, silly me f0rg0t that b0tan d0esn't gr0w 0ld as well.. my bad.. ^^), but then eventually as i read 0n, i f0und 0ut that it was keik0 (bef0re it even came int0 my mind.. ahihi.. ^^).. ü hmm.. what else? i really l0ve h0w y0u wr0te this 0ne.. a very unique way indeed.. it was 0nly at the end that i realized that i've read plain dial0gues - n0 descripti0ns 0r whats0ever (maybe n0w u can tell that i'm getting s0 abs0rbed when i read that i n0tice things all t00 late.. ahihi.. ^^).. s0, great w0rk i say yet again.. ahihi.. keep writing and G0d bless.. see ya 'r0und.. ü ~ yuki ü ~ PS: s0rry f0r typ0s.. my eyes are practically cl0sing while i'm typing this but i just can't sleep s0undly with0ut leaving a review first.. ahihi.. ^^
A lilmatchgirl 2005-05-02 ch 1,	abuselol! So funny! I especially liked it when Hiei went "Do you want to die?" snickers Hiei and Keiko... Alternate pairing indeed - and how! XD
Joichi 2005-04-10 ch 1,	abuseBesides the fact I utterly reveled in reading this shining example of dialogue-driven fiction, at 2 am no less, I had to supress any outbursts - the dead are hard to wake, but not hard of hearing. The characterization was perfect, though I had some time guessing the possessive demon-husband role, though Keiko was my first choice for a long-term relationship fic. At the mention of Hiei's name, a few veins popped. Artfully done =D
Shiro Ryu 2005-01-23 ch 1, anon.	abuseVery amusing! A wonderful one-shot! It has been awhile since I have read any YuYu Hakusho fan fiction. Last author I read in this fandom was sylvannastar (I should probably check and see if she has updated). Anyway, you reminded me how much I like the fandom. I will have to do some exploring. By the way, I love (and I do mean love) your story "Guiding Darkness". Is there any chance you will continue this story (hope, hope, hope, hope, hope)? ^_^
MIKOSAMA 2005-01-20 ch 1, anon.	abuseMEGACUTENESS GR8 JOB
wackoramaco87 2005-01-13 ch 1,	abuseHee. I really enjoyed reading the piece and trying to guess who the couple was. At first I thought it was Yuske and the "old hag", but then I decided that was a little too unique... =D
Rose of the Garden 2005-01-13 ch 1,	abuseCYUTE! I wonder what kinda games they'll play... Heheh.
Star Angel 2005-01-13 ch 1, anon.	abuseInteresting. Aside from fics that were script formatted, I don't recall ever seeing a story that was only dialogue. Even though there was no actual narrated description, I could completely tell what was going on with the scene changes with those 2 girls that were going Hiei-stalking. And what I thought was very well done was that you were able to get across the characters feelings from angry to teasing with just the dialogue alone. Considering what this is, set 30 years in the future with married life softening the edges of a relationship and the personalities that go with it, with only imagination filling in how they got together and how they managed to meld together during their wedded life, I thought you managed to keep the basic essences of Keiko and Hiei in character. From a literary standpoint, I'm impressed with what you've managed to convey with so little. And from a fangirl standpoint - I just loved this and thought it was so SWEET! You did a wonderful job.

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