THis story was Beautiful. This is one of your first story I read. The first one was (If I was guy.)your Case closed one. Your writing style is very good.

cool

not bad... quite tragic really. i don't think i've read many wormmon pieces...

One word; TALENT. You have amazing talent.

Looking down I watch the night

Running from the sun

Orphan stars and city lights

Fading one by one

Oh sweet memories, I call on you now...

And oh, so much is wasted

And oh, so little used!

But the trick of the dreamer

Is keeping yourself from the blues...

Everyone's a hero

If you want to be!

Everyone's a prisoner

And holding their own key!

And every move I make

Every step I take

I'm always one step closer-

I don't mind running alone!

-'Running Alone', Journey. I got the song from a Diane Duane book, High Wizardry. Me and Wormmon-chan sing it together sometimes. Sometimes Ken joins in...ahh, sweet memories...

That was very good...better than anything I could do

Awww... how sweet. And you wrote this after seeing *one* episode? @_@ Sheesh! You're good! VeryveryVERY good!

I luv Wormmon, and Ken! GREatness.

Wow. For your first Digimon fic, that was REALLY good! _ I love your work. This is so...GOOD! Wow. Just...wow.

*claps!* I like I like!

Wahh! That was soo beautiful! It was perfect! I love wormmon!

Wha? You changed author names and I didn't know? AHHHHHHHHHHH! I was looking for Digimon fic and and...*pouts* I am uninformed!

Good for a first effort.