Wow. I just read this, along with your story Hot Rain, and I've been sufficiently creeped out for the night (But in a good way :) ). This is very unique and original (both stories are), and you have such a talent for writing. How old are you? I loved the twist ending. I'm definetly bookmarking your username.

Pacejunkie referred you to me and when I read this I just had to comment.

I absolutely loved this. The twist at the end was perfect.Really loved all the religious imagery especially the part where he tried to fill her with himself to bring her back to life.

And the little argument between Sayid and Jack about what was really wrong with Sun - that really seemed like it was right out of the show. Jack's repsonse that insanity wasn't communicable sounded just like Jack always looking for the logical conclusion.

Loved the quoting of the psalm as well. Claire's death had me crying but the twist at the end - well lets just say I won't forget that one anytime soon.

*shudder* Dude.. . .creepy.

ah...that was a surprise

God that was GOOD! I did not see that twist coming at all. So sad it was. Very believable. Well done.

Holy shit this is amazing and fabulous. Wow. Plausible and creepy and fitting with the mood of the show. Wow. *runs off to read your other fic*

oh, wow. that's really sad and dark. not even a relatively happy ending, eh? i hope that's not what really happens to my fav couple!

loved this story so different to everything I've seen before

I'm only reading this now? god, it should be written down as a sin...that was creepy. I totally got how Charlie had used his guitar string to strangle Jack. great story. Terrifyingly terrific. brillant.

God DAMN, that was good. Not a fan of tragedy fic but this sucked me right in.

That was f$&#ing brilliant

I love this story! It's so sad but so beautiful! I've read it twice already. I love everything about it, except the whole Claire dying thing. Keep writing!

Wow. Absolutely chilling.

holy CRAP what a twist. dear lord i love this!

Dude, just dude. Brilliant, absolutely brilliant. Amazingly written, I loved this story. All your 'Lost' stories are masterpieces, this one is the best. Of course, personally, I prefer your fluff peices, particularly Picket Fences. This story was very emotional, really well written, keep up the amazing work. Oh, and them reciting Psalm 23 at the end, that was just inspired, I loved it!