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PrInCeSS StArK101
2008-10-31 . chapter 11
Awesome job! luv this tory! plz update soon!
Deathbrush
2008-04-20 . chapter 7
Still reading the story but the end of this chapter brought a thought to mind and I spent the last couple hours researching it trying to figure it out, and as it was 3 am when this thought occurred to me most of my sources for marvel information beyond the net and my own knowledge were not available, so here goes.
When Wolverine was affected by Ron's Petrificus Totalus, I'm not sure if it would work at all on him as True adamantium has been shown to be a universal insulator. It is wholly non ferrous and is a perfect insulator against heat, energy, and, as far as I have been able to find, magic. The best example of it's level of thermal insulation is when Wolverine survived a nuclear blast because his brain was protected by his adamantium coated skull even though all the rest of his flesh was incinerated by the heat.(I apologize for lack of citation on comic and issue number as I have not read it but only have heard of the incident during several conversations about Wolverine's healing abilities and their limits.)
As to electricity there are countless examples of Wolverine cutting live cables and into other powered devices with his claws and having no discernible reaction to charge flowing through them. The only evidence I can find of adamantium conducting electricity is secondary adamantium being able to be damaged by unconventional forms of electricity, namely lightning created by Thor using Mjolnir. This is the only citation I can find of adamantium of any form being affected by mystic energies that don't border on cosmic power levels and as such are impossible to discern if they truly are mystic or cosmic in nature.
So taking this all into account, as well as the protection granted in the Ultimate Marvel Universe against telepathic probes and attacks but is lacking in the Earth-616 reality as far as I know, I would guess Wolverine would be immune to a spell that would either be unable to root in his adamantium infused body because it would be resisted by the material, or if it was deflected by the adamantium coating his skull if the spell actually was neurally inhibitive instead of a muscular inhibitive.
So after that treaties, I am enjoying the story so far and am on to the next chapter.
PS: Thanks to a Ctrl+X accident had to retype this, hope I didn't forget anything from this version.
storylistener
2007-10-15 . chapter 11
This seened to go too fast. Nice idea though.
VampireDelight
2007-09-20 . chapter 11
good, interesting, but there were flaws. There were not enough details, and not enough action. Also a HUMONGUS flaw, there semed to be absolutley no reaction to Voldie's death. It was completly anti-climactic. good idea tho. write a secuel.
dartblade
2006-09-13 . chapter 11
pretty cool story some parts i think could have been better though like the fight between harry and voldimort i mean come on you could have at least made the fight a bit more interesting, and i think you should have put the rescue in it too, other then that everthing was pretty good keep up the good work and is the other stories going to be in this as other chapters or completely other stories?
Wild KS Phoenix
2005-07-12 . chapter 11
I just ran across you tonight and read a couple of your stories. This story had all my favorite Heroes in it. I started looking for some crossover fics recently and tonight was Kim Possible. Your name popped up and I've enjoyed the two stories I've read tonight. The main reason I started reading Harry Potter was because of my cousin. Then Spiderman, X-Men, Batman, and Superman I grew up watching. I did get into the Justice League cartoon too for a while, I've missed the JL Unlimited (too busy with school). Nicely written story, way to stay true to the characters. Well, I'll go back and review the other story I read later cuz it's kinda late and I need to go to bed.
legolasfan91
2005-07-07 . chapter 11
I REALLY LIKE HOPE YOU UPDATE SOON
FF-loverHP1
2005-07-06 . chapter 11
good story would be a great story if you updated the league t the newer one. The one with the space station and all of the goodies. That way you could include apoclypse and the enemies of green latern.
Den Scurman
2005-03-25 . chapter 11
Fansinating...absolutly fasinating. See what happens when I do a crossover search for the JL and I find Kim Possible as a member? Then go totally out there by throwing in Harry Potter?! Dude, that was cool. Anyway, I'm quite surprised with this story. The merger of the universes was good, nobody would expect the new JL headquarters to be in Colorado, and pairing up odd groups (HP and Spidey) was a good and necesary touch. I still think Wolvie should've gone with Kim.
The fight scenes do need some fleshing out, and the plot seemed "slightly" rushed, and how the heck does Superman know Prof. Dumbledore? And what was going on on the badguy's side? Although I've only seen the first HP movie and I'm vaguely familure with Voldmort, it would've been fun to see him interact with the Joker. Also, for an all-powerful wizard that strikes fear in the mere mention of his name, he died surprisingly quick, unless that's just you want us to think. ;)
Overall, this was a good and fun story. I normally hang out on the Ranma 1/2 side, but stories like this are worth venturing out for. Thanks for the story. It was much fun.
(B-D)
The Halfa Wannabe
2005-03-06 . chapter 8
You were right. I would never have guessed that Kim would end up fighting the Joker.
The Halfa Wannabe
2005-03-06 . chapter 6
You are truly unique, I myself set up a story that would literally allow me to bring in any character from anything ever created, so long as it is set in present times. KUTGW
The Halfa Wannabe
2005-03-06 . chapter 4
Didn't you ever read Hogwarts, A History? It is impossible to apparate on the grounds of Hogwarts.
Oh well your story,BUT HOW THE HELL DOES SUPERMAN KNOW ALBUS DUMBLEDORE?
The Halfa Wannabe
2005-03-06 . chapter 2
I can't place my finger on it, but there is something seriously wrong about Harry Potter joining the Justice League. THIS IS ABSOLUTELY CRAZY. cool.
El Gecko
2005-03-03 . chapter 11
Very well written. I like the characters you picked, well maybe not all of the characters (Kim Possible Gang). But overall I find you a good writer and person of extraordinary imagination. Try working on your fight scenes a little more. And there are many more x-men you could include. Keep up the good work
Big B
2005-02-10 . chapter 5
I think you got your super villians mix up Electo is the master of electricty. I think that shocker uses shock waves. I doubt that Batman would take his mask off to someone he doesn't know.Also Professor X just blurting out Bruce Wayne is a stretch. He is invading Batman's privacy going against his own code. It's highly unlikely he would do that. Besides that this is a decent story just kind of rough around the edges.
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