I think there's a lovely moment there when you realise that Iruka's determined waiting has been somewhat unrequited. Then he gets all defensive about it. :D Sweet x

awesome! aww it was so sad..but then cute at the end! beautifully written! thanks for posting! ^^

OMG!
Poor iruka!
I loved it!
Awsome job!

Angst is overrated. I much prefer reading fluff etc. (although I can't seem to write anything but angst..) This was really good. The ending was perfect!

omg, i love it. and it /was/ angsty-ish, a bit.

W-O-N-D-E-R-F-U-L ! ^_^

KAKASHI.YOU.FRIGGEN.BASTARD.MAKING.ME.AND.IRUKA.WORRY.LIKE.THAT!
dumb **!
honestly i thought kakashi would immediately run to iruka and beg for sex but no he acted LIKE AN IDIOT AND DID SOMETHING STUPID!
DAMN IT ALL!
this brilliant. im not flaming you at all
i loved this
it made me really into the story plot ( pretty obvious by my reaction)
VERY GOOD!

Okay. I'll admit it. You made me cry.

... *grovel*

õh
so...
so beautifull!
please!
more! ;_;
and.. a trutly kiss!
Kakaxiru forever!
*_*

I love your fanfic!! i can read it a thousand times

Very well, you did... sorry, talking like Yoda, I have. Nrrgh (hits head with book) Ah1 I can speak normally! Yeah! Anyways, that was very good. Do say that Iruka lived. He did, right? And stayed with kakashi, right? Right?!?!... Maybe you should just let me think that, cuz if it's not true, Ithink I will cry.

love it!

This is such an awsome story. I wish I could write something like this myself. I have the imagination for writing, just not the talent for it. lol Good story though ^-^.

Whaddaya mean 'can't write angst to save your life'? That was GREAT! If I had an account, this would be on my favorites list!! (But I don't have an account ^_^*)

Wow. Holy **, that was good. And the angst wasn't terrible. It's always nice to have a good ending. Care to expand it at all??