Great yet short story! Too bad Riddick left her, but at least they'll see each other later. I love reading stories with Jack as a kid. So many possibilities..lol. Awesome job!

Wow. Short, but sweet. And helarious.
' Jack and Riddick fighting aliens and crime.'
Such a cute thought. Like Riddick was some kind of detective. LOL! Can you imagin that? Uh-oh. Oh no! I'm getting the fanfiction fever. Now I've got this summery for a fic about a detective on a case looking for a girl trapped in prison. It'll be called 'Devil Never Cry' Only because Devil May Cry is my fav game...Teehee. Look out, I might just post this... Keep on writing. I can't wait to see more from you!

Awesome! I love this story, I really hope you continue this. And by the way, that was so Jack, I was laughing towards the middle of the story. Right on. Update soon!

Jack B. Badd and Richard B. Riddick out on another excruciating adventure! YA!

aw! Poor Jack... HEY! I wrote a chapter with this almost exact scene... weird... only I didn't post it yet(good thing because now I can change it... or more-so I have to change it)

hehehe! Go Jack... give Riddick the evil eye!

-laughing her butt off- Jack and Riddick fighting aliens during the day and still has time to come home for dinner! (sorry had to put that in!) Loving it!

AW! WHAT A TERRIBLE ENDING! (not really, but it was very heartbreaking) HOW DARE RIDDICK... (yeah yeah I know he did leave her) BAD!

please keep going!

Moosey

That was sweet..*smiles*
I simply adore Jack as a child, there is so much that could be done with her. You really do have something lovely going here, as far as I can tell.
I do hope you will post more soon.

Much laughter,
Elf

hmm. seems kinda interesting. update again soon i wanna see what you're gonna do with this