its interesting. but i like it. ttyl

It's a little overwhelmingly sappy... but the idea (of his reaction) isn't so wrong :-)
Ciao!

god...that was so fluffy! I LOVE FLUFFY! And sweet and adorable. Thank you so much!

This is so cute, you're a really great writer! You should definitely keep writing!

Aww... ^^

(And that's really all there is to say. Adorable!!)

Ah, how sweet. Ah the times of first borns when there is new life... You know you COULD use this "one-shot" into a story... I would love that.

Good job.

Aw! *sniff* Hermione's right. He sees himself as too much of a baddie, when he's been so good for so long. He deserves all the best.

Well done!

That was cute story

Sorry about my review for 'snapes first time' i was compleatly out of it and my sister was pushing for. the computer. I didnt read Dthe tango line and was wondering why snape was counting. It was well written, then. sorry about the weird review, I'm pretty stupid.
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How sweet! I could picture him looking at the baby just as you described it. Great imagery!

Sappy, but good. I liked it.

Aw. I like it.

Aww, CUTE!

AW that was am amazing story *wipes tears away*

Hi everyone! Thanks for the reviews!

Blue Furry Elf, "heart wrenching" is used to described something sad. I think a better word would be "heartwarming", used to describe something sweet and happy. But don't worry, your English is better than the English of a lot of the native English-speakers I have encountered!