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Madhatter45
2008-05-28
ch 8,
abuse...AMAZING!
michellemabelle
2008-01-03
ch 8,
abuseyou are an amazing writer. i loved this story!
Jungle Julia
2007-12-27
ch 8,
abuseRead the story in one sitting--absolutely amazing! With this story and your exquisite writing, you have made me care for Phantom of the Opera fan fiction again. There has been so much crap loaded on the just in section lately, it made my mind numb. I'm going to read all your other stories now!
januaryfreeze92
2007-09-29
ch 8,
abuseIt made me feel horrible at times, but it was written beautifully. You are truly talented!
the yellow flower
2007-05-29
ch 8,
abuseWHOA!
Sarah Crawford
2007-01-30
ch 8,
abuseI hardly know what to say in this review. I had anticipated a dark story when I began to read this one, but this is absolutely amazing. Your writing style works very nicely for this story. My only complaint as a writer myself would be that you tend to start almost too many sentences with the word "but" or "and." Other than that, this is a great piece of writing. I couldn’t stop reading until I’d finished the whole story. You have captured Leroux's characters very well. The deception and madness are portrayed wonderfully. Fantastic work.
Broken-Vow
2006-12-08
ch 1,
abuseI love this story! I read it twice before finally signing up for an account, and just found it! I love Leroux, and you capture the essence so beautifully! Thanks for a really amazing story!
Mira-Jade
2006-03-03
ch 8,
abuseWow.

That was creepy. very morbid. I liked it though. The last line was very inspired, almost like reading Leroux all over again.

Can't wait to read more stuff from you.

~MJ
Persephone Chiara
2006-02-19
ch 8,
abuseWOW. Just WOW...brilliant storyline!
BONANZA!
2005-07-27
ch 8, anon.
abusethis story has made me hate christine even more than i already did.

very well writen though, nice job
BONANZA!
2005-07-27
ch 8, anon.
abusethis story has made me hate christine even more than i already did.

very well writen though, nice job
wendela
2005-07-21
ch 7,
abuseTwo reviews in one day, not quite my style, but you just deserve it ;-)

"Death, for him it would be liberation..(...).. that she was inseparably bound to him forever" with that you made lunacy,madness and illogical circling thoughts completely normal,understandable, rectillinear and logic. How I love to read what it's like to be in the mind of a twisted Erik. Thank you for writing this!

The end is incredibly sad, but does completely fit. It was vivid from the start this story would have an unhappy ending, despite that I was hoping these two would gain some happiness in the last chapter. But the beauty in the sadness surprised me. Delicious mournful!
wendela
2005-07-21
ch 4,
abusethis is beautiful! Like you wove pure emotions between the words... the feelings of the characters are so real and vivit it is like they are my own. Brava!
Miss Ann Thrope
2005-07-15
ch 8, anon.
abuseThis is entirely creepy and wonderful and sad and beautiful and tragic and HORRIBLE. And totally worthy of Leroux's Erik, when taking a turn for the worse. Thanks!
Pinkmoon
2005-05-07
ch 8,
abuseThat was one of the strangest stories I have ever read. But I loved it! It has that maddness that I believe processed Erik and how I imagined Christine would have reacted had she stayed with him. In all the other EC stories, Christine seems to have a change of heart to soon. I can't wait to read more of your work.
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