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Reviews for: Upon the Sea of Chaos
Hay Lin La
2007-11-16 . chapter 1
I guess this explanation makes sense. except for the whole 'Lina met the Golden Lord once before'. in the series she didn't realize until getting her hands on the real Claire Bible.
Mistress DragonFlame
2005-01-15 . chapter 1
Oi. Xellos has never been, and never will be, a human. Ever. And, he was created FOR the War of the Monsters Fall, or right before it, like, a decade at most! So it being 2,0 years before he cast the Giga Slave, long before the War of the Monsters Fall, is completely false.

Other then that... it wasn't a terrible read. I certainly read better, but they were perfect. Yours was better then average. n.n Quite an acoplishment. Better then my work, anyway.
Gerao-A
2005-01-14 . chapter 1
Ramon: magnificent fic I love it!

Sunny: keep up the good work
Chie Pet
2005-01-14 . chapter 1
That was an interesting theory. I enjoyed it. Lina was really cute!
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