Terrific! I do like the idea about Jennifer being connected to Lucius Snow. Gary needs to tell her that he got the paper first.

Superb! Great idea!

Very innovative idea.

Fantastic start!

loved it best yet

Wow! This was incredible! You did a great job. I hope that there will be another story.

Hey! This was a really good story, and was well written too. You should keep writing; this story rocked my world!

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I love your story! Espically the ending. The way Jennifer knew Snow, and Snow's explination on the space time continuum thing. It's just an overall great story. I would love to see what happens when Gary's and Jennifer's paths cross again ;@)

I just LOVE this story! It is very creative, and ingenious. Great job!

Great story. I absalutley loved it. Some parts made me cry. I love early edition and you kept Gary in character very well. Well done. And I can't wait to read other stories you have written.

Hey, that was good. :) I really liked it, very creative and well-done. Good work.

Yay! He's alive! Awesome ending! I like how you made Jennifer have some kind of connection with Snow! Jeez, you're really good at this!

Woah, that was a cool twist how you made the ending like the episode "Fate"! On to Chapter 4! :c)

Gah! I didn't even notice you had part 2 up yet and you already have 4 chapters! Oh well, at least I could see what happened without waiting a long time for more, I'm going to read part 3 now! Sorry this isn't a long review...Man, this was REALLY good...okay, time for part 3! :c)

AHHHHHHH... Where's the rest of the story! I need to know what happens!