this story does make szense its sad and deep The saddest part was defently when his mom saw him dead damn this story is sad the dude who wrote it is such a downer

I loved it it was so good. I like how you used the song with it it fit just right. I love the song too.

WoW! that song fit perfectly with the story. You have a really nice writing style also, which really compliments the kind of song that you chose

Errmhuhh...I kind of...hm. I don't really know whether I should saywhat I want to say. I like the whole G/V thing, we haven't seen much in a while- but...hmm...my beliefs kind of state that you don't go to Heaven if you commit suicide. You had a couple of typos too. It's...yeah. It's alright besides that, I guess...