My god, for only three chapters, I am captivated. This story is reall well done. Excellent plot, excellent job on the character, overall excellent job. Keep it up.

Rude threatening Auron? And Rude always was one of my favourite characters. *sniff* Been nice knowing you, Cueball.

o nice place to end this. Great twist with Auron at the end of this chapter too. Very well done, lil Bro. I really enjoy Reno's "Yeah, I don't get it, fuck it." attitude to the middle. :) keep it up

Well, this was different. I don't remember one with Avalanche all dead this quick. Interesting way that Lulu and Auron came in.

*flails* Squee! Auron! Doubt Rude'd be able to kill him, but this ain't my fic; it's yours. ^^ can't wait for more.

Oh crap! Is Auron gonna go bubonic on everyone? Well, great chapter and I'll be looking forward to more.

I like this story so far. It's... shocking. My hair's been standing on end, and I've been wanting to see Scarlet get hers with every member of Avalanche that gets crucified. This story really makes me want to see Shinra go down. Just one problem.

Yuffie. She's the daughter of Lord Godo of Wutai. Sure, Midgar beat Wutai in the Midgar/Wutai war. However, after the fall of Meteor, Shinra's not as powerful as it had been the week previous. Now is *not* the time for Scarlet to be making an enemy of Godo by crucifying his daughter (even if she is already dead). I'd say a call for the return of her body in the next chapter is in order, or at least some sort of mention that Scarlet's refusing to hand it over.

Sweet, Auron makes an apperance, sweet. Can't wait for the next chapter so please hurry upo. Love it.

This story is crazy. Amazingly good, but by now that's to be expected from you. Crazy, I say.
I can't wait for the Beebop crew to show up. Or, crew /member/, as you seem to have no qualms with killing your characters. This is a very respectable trait (unless you're the guy who writes "ER", in which case you need to retire, and realize ya' don't HAVE to kill someone to make your show worth-while. Oh, and getcher paws off "The West Wing". Kill one more person by HITTING them with a helicopter, and face my wrath... eh, sorry) and indeed, you use it very respectably. I have to say, you caught me by surprise a couple times there. I was /PISSED/ when you started talking about Rude staking the dead of AVALANCHE on the beach. I mean, how /DARE/ they?!?!? I LOVE the Turks, but... WAUGH!

Oh my! This is just too cool! So far we have Vincent and Auron...are you gonna put Spike in here, too? PLEASE?!?!?! That would just completely make my day because I love all three of them almost to the point of obsession. I'm adding this to my favorites, so update soon.

I'm really glad to see you update this fic. I love the personality you put in every single one of your characters. The relationships are very vivid and the emotions are always rolling at the surface. Very nice chapter.

I don't see anything wrong with that not-title. Sinning in the Dark...sounds alright. +nods+ The beginning was applause-worthy. I love Elena to bits at times like these -I lie, I'm partial to her all the time. I'm only on the second chapter but already I can tell this is going to be wonderful.

Now if you'll excuse me, Mr. Spiegel, I have to go read said chapter. +bows+ AMAZING JOB. I love your writing. Amazing. From the little side-notes to the description and flow of it all.. I'm amazed. [/un-needed praise]

-Elena Trauma the Not-So-Great

Cool! I like the way you're writing the Turks. ^_^

VERY good job Re. I love the concept and this whole idea. I like how easily you make the Turks put off a job and who they are and what they are. Vincent is interesting, as is the whole world you've set up.

Oh and this little detail: "Reno hated this job, minus the fact they got sand-safe wheels on their cars for this.

Not many knew it, but the sight of someone actually dying made him ill, which was why he'd never killed anyone. He'd set them up for someone else's taking, but never his own. He didn't mind corpses or near-dead bodies, just the actual dying state."

Nice.

I like how it's begun thus far. Continue on this as well as you've started it, and you might be added onto my list of favorites. :D

ONWARD!